Player Comments on Rebel Jedi 2: The Rebel Base

Even the Habsburg family tree has more branches than this story.

Since this author is long gone, I can go ahead and mercilessly rip on this thing hahaha. The plot might be very fun: you know escaping on a space ship. HOWEVER like the curse of fanfiction written on this site, the writer obviously thought we had watched the show this thing was based off on. Guess what? i didn't watch and I don't care.

I already am not a huge fan of sci-fi, especially ones with Blasty Blasty aliens and laser beams, but this story kept throwing this stuff at me like it's throwing candy at a shrieking toddler. Yeah laser sword, wow.

The characters? Don't give a darn about them. Uninteresting,bland, already forgot their names.

You know what's the most funny part? The feeling the author had given up on it at the halfway point. The death scènes aren't even fun to read. The text is getting shorter, the descriptions lazier and of course the story ends up with a bang.

To be continued.

The "End Game and Leave Comment" situation is something I really dislike seeing, especially when it comes to having absolutely no hint that you might die if you choose that choice. It was just: "Here, choose one of these randomly, because I'm going to give you basically no information about what's happening!" These make bad stories.

The writing itself is decent but can be better. More description would make it better and the story as well. A background is always useful, and could easily just be put in as an optional link that can be used by the reader if needed.

Looking at your profile, I can see that you won't be back to fix anything, so this can just be for others that have stories and/or are writing one. Pay attention to what you're doing and plan ahead. Having an outline is good and keeps you on path, and can easily be modified to accommodate some unforeseen issue. The writing was free of errors, but it wasn't that long anyway.

4/8

Does not follow EndMaster's guide for a good Pokemon game

You are now a rare occurrence of scoring lower than 5 on my personal scale system.

You can't even spell the base material correctly. Oragana should be Organa, Mos Esle should be Mos Eisley, and Tuskan Raiders should have an E not an A! These are just the spelling errors in the base material!

Normally I can get past spelling errors if the story is redeeming enough. This was not the case here. You seemed to have rushed everything. There's no flesh on the bare bones that make up this story. It is also completely linear. Nothing you decide to do changes anything in the story except when you die. There is a pointless amount of deaths in this story.

2/10 would not recommend. I apologize for the harshness but I am a hardcore Star Wars fan. I have been disappointed with the Star Wars content so far. I hope part 3 isn't as disappointing.

It pretty fun

It was at least greater than the other one, but few tweaks are still needed. Work hard!

Not as good as the first

boring

yet another interesting take

This was a short story that passed some time and keep me entertained for the short amount of time I had.While it was short I also realise it’s a whole story line in all honesty so I can’t complain on the quote on quote “Shortness.”I find this to be a story that’s there to pass a few minutes if your bored as hell and generally a cool concept.Cause I really love stars wars, rainbow six siege, anything about weaponry and combat I love.So to have weaponry, combat, tactics, in a whole series is a daydream come to life!
I’m hoping you haven’t just given up on this site since this game has the potential to be something great*ahem trump quote* and as always, I encourage you to make this into a bigger series.4/8 great job with a 1/2 rating.-Kinda regards Mistery

It's a great standalone, but it's not very related to Rebel Jedi. If you classify something as a sequel it should build on the original.

6.7/10

A bit short

Better but too short.

Potential

Much better than the first.

At some points I felt as though this story just gave you random deaths for seemingly normal answers.

For example, when your fellow gunner dies, I picked to stay in my dome instead of helping him. However, I died because "a stray blaster fire engulfes your dome in flames". At some points this was pretty frustrating, because the deaths had no correlation to the action that I picked!

But for the most part, this story was pretty good. A definite improvement from the first one. The writing could've been more detailed, and the deaths/choices/logic could have been more thought-out, but that's all of my complaints. Good story.

6/8.

This was better than the first one.

Better than the first but still not very good.

It's okay. Lots of grammar errors though.

It's alot better then your first game.

Not bad, but could be improved upon.

I liked it. Thought you improved quite a bit from your first game ^_^

quite short if i do say so myself. but still good game

Better stay far from it!

Why are there so many star wars games? this one was ok

need more items,maybe longer and beeter /more pi,but its good.

Still linear, but better

better.

I liked this one alot better. More plot, more storyline. Still could be tweaked a bit though, a bit more, but this was very enjoyable. Nice job!

This one was much better than the first. There was a better plot and more storyline. I enjoyed it a lot.

way better

Much better this time, but problems still persist. I had little idea of the background and had to make decisions with little tactical relevance.

like I said in the other. But a little better

very good

cooler

As a huge star wars fan, I can only say... Man, that really sucked! far too short, daft spelling and especially severe tactical errors

Much better than the first "Rebel Jedi" game. Still, being a StarWars fan myself, I see that the series has much to be desired.

Better than the first, but still has many problems with spelling and grammar.

Very good, Rodney! Much better than the first! Strong action and story, multiple ways to accomplish the same thing! Still linear, and still contains the dreaded "dodge left, dodge right" scenarios, but I like how, in one instance, you say, "You sense an attack coming from x," which if you heed that, allows you to make that correct choice. If you're set on using those kind of choices, prefacing them with that might work well.

This one was good too I have to say. However, I enjoyed the more jedi like stuff in the first. Still a good continuation for the story. Not everyone will like the linear "choose correctly or you die" method though, it's also know as trial and error of course, which some retail games actually use from time to time. I don't mind of course.

I can't say anything that hasn't been said before

i kept dying. thats called linear. keep fine tuning this series.

Great improvement on the first! Pictures were nice, and it was a bit easier. If you spent a bit more time trying to make the storyline a bit more interesting, it would be better. Still, great job!

The first one was much better. The problem in this game was that there was too much "Death" links, which means you die too fast or too much. Great description and good grammar, though.

disapointing

If only it wasn't linear. Than I would have to give you a lower grade. It's a great story, but the action and everything is linear.