"Too few ratings to be ranked"
Played times (finished )
"Walk in the park"
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
"Appropriate for all ages"
Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.
There's a substitute teacher at school today. What are you going to do about it?
This is a great idea, but it could use some improvements.
First of all, I'd love to see more detail! Who am I? Who is my friend Monica? What is the school I am going to like?
Second of all, I was really disappointed in the endings. When I entered the portal and saw that I had three different options for adventures, I thought 'Great, now I can go on three different types of adventures! Maybe this is going to be a good storygame.'
Alas, I found out that all three led to endings. I think you could really do something with these three adventures! I would love it if you actually had each of the three options as an actual adventure. It would make it more entertaining and solve the problem of being linear!
on 1/10/2016 5:23:13 PM with a score of 0
Too short and linear, but it was okay.
on 6/5/2019 6:29:12 AM with a score of 0
Hmm it's pretty nice. They don't all have to be super long.
Just short and sweet.
on 6/25/2017 7:48:23 PM with a score of 0
on 6/17/2017 12:28:28 PM with a score of 0
You made a game with time travel in it and ended the game as soon as the time travel started? Why?
on 5/19/2017 6:20:47 AM with a score of 0
I thought this would be a very good story;
I thought, "Wow! Time travel adventures! Count me in!" but no; 2/3 of the links lead to death. Maybe you could add a little more story?
So, basically, what the featured comment said xD
on 1/12/2017 2:14:59 AM with a score of 0
that was short and boring
— ilovedogs on 9/6/2016 6:35:23 PM with a score of 0
on 4/25/2016 10:19:44 AM with a score of 0
Really short. Very few choices.
— Gamechannger78 on 3/24/2016 5:43:55 PM with a score of 0
Not many options
— Critic on 11/15/2015 1:28:47 AM with a score of 0
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