Succubus in Hiding

Player Rating?/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on ratings since
played times (finished )

Story Difficulty7/8

"wade in shark infested water"

Play Length?/8

"Unknown / Not Set"

Maturity Level6/8

"I'll need to see some identification"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably between PG-13 and R.

This is the story of a criminal doomed to execution saved offered a second chance of the Church. Little does he know, however, there is more to the Church than meets the eye.

This game was ultra-rushed, so I will most likely take it down for additional editing later.

Player Comments

For what was completed, the writing isn't terrible, but in addition to being a lot less finished than some of the other storygames thrown into the mix at the last second to avoid shame, there were also way too many "choose A and live, choose B and die" situations, which really isn't my cup of tea (and my experience is that almost no one likes those sort of set ups). It's especially a bad idea to start the story right off the bat with such a choice.

Still, I think there is room to make it decent, and after you unpublish and redo some it, I think it will rise in the rankings of this contest.
-- Fluxion on 8/1/2019 7:23:39 PM with a score of 0
It wasn't bad for what you wrote but it isn't finished. There are options that I would really like to see through. But I really love the idea of the fighting yourself and this has a lot of potential. So I encourage you to finish creating the story and keep up the good work
-- Xavier on 7/31/2019 12:11:47 PM with a score of 0
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