Player Comments on The Corn Maze

Pretty fun. There are certainly plenty of things that are enjoyable about this storygame. I quite liked the blend of fantasy and humor that was present as there were certainly a bit of surprises in this.

My only complaint is that the characters themselves felt a bit flat at times, but it's only a minor nitpick as this storygame was certainly fun to play :)

Not terrible by any means. I think your story flow is fine but maybe you should put more detail into dialogue, as your characters are very one-dimensional. Also, for a horror story, even if taken as horror comedy, the humor sometimes felt cheap. Practice makes perfect, keep on writing!

Excellent, just great fun like story games are meant to be :D The pics really brought it to life though Mara didn't really have much of a role except right at the end when she made a good expendable decoy :P

Make it less hard please. Also, add Josiah Smith, he doesn't get enough rep.

It's not very scary

It is very fun!!

It was really fun

I thought it was a great adventure through the maze. Very detailed. Do wish it had more options though.

I liked the parts involving fairies and mermaids. People were nice in the maze. I wish it wasn't so simple and there could have been more dialogue.

Noice

Very well written story game! I really enjoyed playing it!
A couple things to work on: Some of the characters are a little flat, and you could improve on them and the dialogue. Also, you have a small mistake with the one ending where Mara turns into a fairy again. Even if you don't click the button allowing Mara to turn into a fairy, the witch's ending says she turns into a fairy again. Small error, but noticeable. Lastly, on the information page you say our friend is Nara, with an N, but in the story it's actually Mara, with an M. Just to point out :)
Overall this is a great story game, I enjoyed playing it, and I would definitely recommend it. Short and sweet! :)

You're trying to tell me you couldn't find a single picture of a werewolf, but you *could* find one where Doge was photoshopped onto a lion?

Damn, that was trippy, but fun. It could have been longer (you basically meet a different character for each choice, so I feel each event could have been expanded upon). 5/8.

Some errors with finding the right words to use. Kinda makes it awkward, mentally snapping me out of the story when that occurs. I think it deserves a higher rating than the current one.

It's pretty fun. Not much horror. Good humor and some nice twists. I like that there are plenty of varied endings.

I told Mara to go and used a wish to escape. It was actually very entertaining. Good Job storywriter!!!

Fun, but really easy. try making it a little harder and more complicated.

It's a very well made story. I love the pictures. The only bad thing is; you need more detail. I would like to read more of dem stories that you have! Keep it Up!

It was alright to me. Slightly more fun than homework.

Not bad, but fairly short. 5/8.

Its a lot better than the crap we've had recently on this site. I just wish it could be a bit longer. I gave it a 5/8, because it's certainly not the best nor certainly not the worst.

Good, for a first game! It was a bit illogical and I feel there weren't enough choices but still far better than most first games on the site!

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