Player Comments on The Tapestry

I am extremely offended. I am NOT offended by the content of the story at all, that is really tame, but everything else here is highly offensive.

I am slightly offended that that author actually thinks that this story is so edgy it will make anyone uncomfortable. Although wrapped differently by this author, these religious themes aren't exactly new ideas, and have been played out multiple times and in many ways. As a Christian, I am more offended that the storytelling in this game is so bad it makes my head hurt.

What totally offends me is the horrible writing, grammar, and spelling mistakes that permeate this "story". (Yes, this is so bad calling it a story is a reach.) There are so many errors one must almost assume it was written in some kind of code.

The description says I will get lots of "tolls" in this story. Yes, it took a toll on my mental well being. After starting this story, I began hoping the author meant TROLLS, because that would have made the story fun. But no, alas, the author meant "tools", which were no fun at all, and they couldn't even be bothered to spell check the description.

The item use was very clunky, and made the game tedious.

Overall, not good, not close to good, not even ok. Bad, very very bad.

It's fine, but the grammar and spelling is so bad...

The grammar just hurt my heart and soul

The entire thing made no sense and was so full of typos. Spell checkers exist, you know.

This game certainly is a relic of the site and should not be up by today's standards!

The grammar really bothered me.

The premise is honestly absurd beyond belief.

Truth be told the only thing I found offensive is the constant spelling and grammar mistakes. I personally also found the whole thing ridiculous, though I am not personally super religious, I know enough that this made me laugh at how ridiculous it is.

Interesting to say the least.

Awesome, I like how you have to use items. I scrubbed aside most of the grammar issues in my way, but it didn't soak much up, so it wasn't that big of a deal. I honestly didn't understand half of it though, not from word misspells, I just don't understand this type of stuff.

Sooo... Mary also bore the Antichrist? Inteesting, but stupid...

As a Christian I am extremely offended! Not because I get mad when people suggest that Jesus wasn't the son of God, more because the story of Jesus having an evil twin brother was like a really bad bible fanfic. This must be how Dracula felt when he read Twilight :p

ok..

That made no sense... I needed more light, the flashlight made me restart the game and I won by using the rubber gloves as light...

Man, that was confusing. I followed the guide but it did n't work.

Too easy.

Pretty good, but plagued with bugs. Also-the twelve apostles could not have dined at stonehenge without taking about two years. They were in Israel you dope!

It was pretty weird. Interesting, but not really a game. I gave it a 5.

This is kind of weird.

It's not got much good grammar, and had shameful advertising towards your other game (Mattias). I give it about a three. It was an okay idea, although I had to play it a few times because some paths lead to nowhere but a dead-end.

You know, I could swear I've played this before, but there is no comment anywhere. I think the story you've concocted is original and not at all offensive. However, while I enjoyed puzzling through the items to read more of your story, I didn't really like just clicking each item until it worked. I'd like to hear more about archaeology and what the items are actually used for. Good job.

ur spelling and grammars is bad, but otherwise it is an ok game.

Okay. I finished it. It is okay.

Eh... Okay..

- Harry Raef

Even though it is against the bible, since it is totally fictional I don't care. It has a great use of items although at first it was a little confusing.

Nice short game. I like the tiein to Cryptode & Mattias, but I would be surprised to see people find it offensive. I actually liked the use of the items -- it was different, and made it like a fun little puzzle to solve. If you were to change anything, I'd get rid of the END GAME item and put a link on every page that says "Leave the Tapestry"

A little confusing and you could have provided a better description. I actually liked the plot and hope that you eventually expand and make it a big game. Just some thoughts: You should add an actual setting by which you can add some links in the game to move around and use the items at parts around the room. Also, there are a few bugs with the item uses. Can you also make it seem a little less of a continuation of Cryptode, maybe add that as a description that you are just using the idea of "the group" for the enemy. Overall a pretty good game 7/8.

Okay. Nice plot, but... the usage of items overall kills the game, since people might get confused.

is this a continuation of cryptode? second, jerusalem is still there. a few spelling errors but not bad.

Hope you engoy. 1000 Points = Winner!