Player Comments on Wolf's Love

This is an unpublished story by an author who hasn't even logged in in six years, why are people playing it still?

Pretty good, could be better

i like thise

It's not very good. Punctuation and grammatical errors litter this thing like trash on the side of a road.

I liked it, it was sweet, but it could definitely use some work!

It was nice and all but no matter what path you picked its just the same thing but a different wolf and different environment. It's a great story and has lots of potential but it needs different things to happen and needs to be longer. I'm not saying that I want it to be 10,000 pages long though. Its just that I can probably finish in about 5 or 6 clicks. I'm not too much of a good writer myself but even I think that this has plenty of room for improvement.
Wow! You actually bothered to read this? Good job!

l like wolf

Its a really sweet game

I love this! Please add more! Also you should make one were there are horses!

It was certainly short and sweet. I got Snow as my mate. I wish you could actualy raise your pups, and their were more defined choices, but over-all very well done. Please make it longer, or at least make a sequel.

Okay, there were many, MANY errors in this story. I saw many words that weren't even capitalized, and spots where there should've been some kind of punctuation. Also, this story was awfully short. I got through it in maybe five clicks, and that's not a good thing.
The writing does have potential. Add more description to each page, maybe. And go through your story to find mistakes before you publish it, because there were a lot. 1/8.

Heh, I love wolves! This game is not the best, but not the worst!

Unmmm ok

short, cute, great if you want a little quick happyness

Wow...OKAYYYY Not much to say but....I wouldn't give it an A or a B....sorry....

This is really stupid... The person who made it even said in a part of the story that she didn't come up with an original name. THATS LIKE WRITING A NOVEL THEN IN PARENTHESES YOU ALL OF A SUDDEN CRITIC YOUR OWN BOOK just my opinion...

I like things to do with wolves, and things to do with love, so both them together was great.

It should be just a little bit longer but it was pretty good

I think the game is too short and unrealistic. If you were a boy, on the wolf it said him, and love isn't like that. You need to know each other, not just say you love someone.

Small. It's actually very good, but could you make it longer?

A tad confusing, but otherwise good!

Meh I died of starvation

Cool but at the same time a bit boring

Wow you are really hard on yourself. Don't worry it gets easier.

This was an interesting story. It should have been a little longer though.

I know people usually do this, but I hate it when someone disguises an End Game Comments link with an ordinary link. Also, I know it is to make things fun but it really annoys me when I am in the middle of a really interesting game. I was in the middle of attacking a deer when this happened. 2/8

I loved it, just a little short :)

It was good but a little short and just a little bit boring

Was a little confusing, and I think you should make any ending you choose be happy instead of walking away from the female and the game be over.

I am not a critic...

Your story was not bad for a first time but it had more potential although short it was quite cute and adorable :D so i give you a good 5/8 since this was your first C.Y.O.S, But if you make another i will definitely rad it because your little story was for sure not the worst on this site!!! :D :D

ok umm your right snow is not a orinanal name but still LOVE THE FREAKEN STORY I usaly don't give this high of a rating but I loved it. ok that was the good part now for the bad, it was realy short and somewhat good written a few more edits and a litter longer story would be nice and can the wolf plz get a name like put something somewhere that says what you look like and have 2 names one for males and one for females or something like that and a little more commuataion plz would be nice. I know I am SO nice (she says sarcatsily) but keep in mind that this is MY openyon but over all it needs some work and deatails but outher wise this is one of the better ones I've played so make more plz

very cute:)

it ended quickly for me but I will be back (goes back and plays it again)

It was ok, I find the negative comments you put in the blurb and at the ending quite funny because it's not that bad. It's an ok idea and I guess it went as far as it could go, some stronger descriptions of love or expanding the story (rivals, dangers, perhaps human hunters etc) could enliven it.

You just gotta put more thought into it. Sure simplicity is nice, but there's a fine line between simplicity and blandness.

I thought wolves roamed in packs.

i really leiked it #yiff4lyfe

It's was sweet, but it just didn't hold interest nor did it have anything exciting. This was just a game that was barely played for a minute and didn't leave a smile on your face.

Not too shabby :)
Pretty nice.
Enjoyed it! :)

The grammar and spelling is not done well. There are parts that are capitalized, and then parts that are not. That, to me, is a minor annoyance. I have never thought that poor English skills takes away from creative talent. However, I do not feel that the creative talent of the author was being shown to its highest potential in this extremely short story.

Next time, the author might want to think of being more descriptive (e.g: the narrator's gender) and actually formulate a longer story. I am sure that, with more effort put into it, this author could write a great story.

Well, I guess it was kind of cute.

Tanstaafl read my mind of what I was going to say!
I was going to mention one last thing, If you are going to make a decent storygame, Put more text into it.

Yeah, as others mentioned, it should probably be developed more. It was short, and not very descriptive. Just elaborate and give background information and it would be much better.

(you see a chubby wolf. very next option is you love him immediately) Well that escalated quickly

It was actually not too bad. But you should have told us the gender of the wolf we were playing, and maybe give us more background information, like explain why the wolf 'Snow' didn't retaliate much for me trying to attack him.

It was pretty good for a short game. I spend a lot of time on ifunny when i first saw the title I immediately thought Damnmit moon moon! But it was pretty good.

Cute story! The descriptions of the forest were nice.

It's pretty good for a first story, but it is short. Keep it up.
I got to the end and then realised; I just got with a wolf. 0_0 hehe

Don't be too hard on yourself, I've seen a LOT worse first stories. Still, I'd ask a member to look over the story first, pointing at grammar mistakes, things you should elaborate on, etc.
Even if its your first game, try you best on it, give it time.

yeah i know it sucks...and its weird...my writing skills suck i had a lot of motivation and then it went down the toilet and i regret posting it...

Uhh how did the swearing suddenly pop into a nice wolf love story?

Never mind, one moment I try to kill the wolf, the next moment I love him...Ok... Anyways, what gender wolf am I supposed to be?