Player Comments on Zombie Story

Quite enjoyable. The high stakes throughout really made the story.

The dialogue however was quite bland and it was decently written, but enough of it wasn’t to make it a bit cliché.

The humor was a nice touch to the story. However, enough of it was present to the point where it really added off of the stakes of the story.

It needs to be longer and better

It starts with, not be nice or have your life end. Then, you just kind of play until your eventual death.

This is pretty good! If it was just a bit longer tHEN it would be 5 stars

I won!
But it was to short.

pretty good m8, niec gaem!

It was kinda short, nevertheless I liked it.

wait..what happend?

Rushed ending

This story is too linear, and how is calling for help gonna save you when stabbing the zombie won't?

You should develop this more, I don't like that the reader becomes a zombie for no reason after trying to save their sister.

easy :/

The first option, be a jerk, or die. The rst of the game was super easy.

Crap. Absolute Bullshit. Sorry!

A) Several issues with the grammar, while not very bad mistakes, they are noticeable by other people!

B) It's quite short, sorry, mate!

C) Your story lack details, your story is... how do I say dry and boring. Good for a begginner, but there's always time to improve!

There are no endings besides die (many times) or win.

As Benny from Fallout: New Vegas said, "Truth is, the game was rigged from the start".

That was awful compared to your insane asylum games, I would've appreciated a bit more "kick" to the story, and more paths that don't equal me dying on virtually every page.

Very fun. I liked it when I won. I only have one thing to say in terms of constructive criticism: make more choices to make it harder and longer. The difficulty is a bit off, so if you ever make another zombie story I suggest more choices and harder stuff, like more chances of dying. But you used good writing and it had a good storyline, so it was worth it. 5/8

It was okay I guess!

Yay. I won. I liked the ending a lot. It was really optimistic and descriptive, compared to a lot of zombie stories that rather disappointingly have a one-sentence ending after the whole adventure. Nice story that concluded well.

Very Short and VERY boring

Short and sadly a little generic.

Kinda short, And I thought when you play zombie games your suppose to be a macho zombie slayin' machine.

I had fun.

Seth says MEH!!! Short, like your other stories, but good. 3/8

hmm... could be longer

Too short and linear

Your style of writing leaves much to be desired...

Boring for a horror story... sorry author..

short

It's okay. You need to revise it and have more options. I found it very linear.

good, but short. I like how if I get eaten by a zombie I actually do stuff instead of just saying "you die"

meh...kind of boring and way too short

Needs to be longer,More of a storyline

random deaths, very random deaths!

Game feels rushed. Need more everything.

Uuuuuuum, who's Martin?

So many random deaths.

Died right away. pretty good. 5/8

It is good for a story, but for a zombie story it was bad. Zombie stories need a lot more details, gore, horror, and scares. It's good that you used the traditional zombie, but whenever making a zombie story make sure that there is something different such as hero zombies, or some other twist.

Short and simple but fun. I thought it was a little weird that the virus could make you a zombie within 2-4 seconds.

I don't like zombie games, but, this one was pretty good. It had a sort of humor to it. Were it longer it would be much better.

fun

Not a big fan, sorry