HappyPills, The Reader

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1/3/2017

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8/16/2017 5:59 PM

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Hello there.

 

Recent Posts

Grammar in Story Types on 8/1/2017 5:43:53 PM

I was just providing an example.


Grammar in Story Types on 7/31/2017 3:42:30 PM

I was taking a look at Crescentstar's "Three Hundred Thousand Tears" when I noticed that it said that it was "A Edutainment by Crescentstar" 

It should say "An Edutainment by Crescentstar"

I also think that might happen elsewhere, but I haven't found anymore anywhere else.


Preview for Welcome to Reality on 7/22/2017 12:40:31 AM

Thank you, you're feedback is actually greatly appreciated.

Also, if this clears anything up, you get to choose which teen you control on the page following the first one. This is mainly just to grab your attention. The rest is to explain what the first page was saying to the reader, you just find out from each of the different teen's perspectives.


Preview for Welcome to Reality on 7/21/2017 7:56:59 PM

The bitter winter winds blew hard and fast. The forest was dark, the only thing that lit the path of six teens trudging through the packed snow were a couple flashlights and the full moon above them.

"I need someone to remind me why the hell we're doing this." said one of the girls

"Shut up or we're going to get caught." shushed one of the males.

"Caught? In the middle of the forest? At this hour? And by who?"

"It's just a gut feeling."

"Well your gut is wrong."

There was an awkward silence between the teens again. The only other sound that was heard was the snow crunching beneath their feet and the wind blowing snow in their faces.

The largest of the six of the teens carried a large sack. He was dragging it along the ground.

"Be careful with that thing, will ya?" said another one of the male teens, gesturing at the sack. 

The larger teen swung the bag over his left shoulder.

"I don't really understand why we had to come out here so late, and in this weather." said the female teen again. "

If we did it during the day then people would notice us."

"What's your explanation for this weather then?"

"Because the lake that we're going to toss her in is frozen over, and very, very cold. Way below freezing."

"If we're going to kill her, then why are we not dragging her?"

"You know what, just be quiet."

She crosses her arms. "Fine, I'll be quiet."

The six teens come across a clearing. A lake that had been frozen over remained in the center. A shack that was falling apart was barely visible on the other side of the lake.

"Alright. This is the lake. Just toss her in and it'll all be over."

The teen carrying the sack walked over to the lake and threw it in. It broke the surface and plunged deep into the dark water.

"And it's done. Let's all go back before we get frostbite."

The teens all hiked back to the town and returned home for the night. Outside of their homes, the wind began to pick up and blow harder and harder. Lightning struck fiercely, as if the forces of nature were judging them, upset with what the teens had done.

 

So how was the first page in my new story?


Wonderfully 16 on 5/14/2017 12:03:18 PM

Two days ago.


Wonderfully 16 on 5/13/2017 11:50:02 PM

16 years old. It's weird to believe.


Story Filters on 4/15/2017 12:30:46 AM

oh, right, DUH.


Story Filters on 4/14/2017 11:54:42 PM

If this has been mentioned before, please tell me.

I think that we should have certain filters somewhere (like in the search place where you search for different stories) with different filters, such as the age of the story, or the ones that need help, or certain age groups it could be used for. I think it'd also be nice to just be able to find some short stories that you can read in only a short amount of time.


Kid-Friendly Adventures on 4/14/2017 11:44:06 PM

I think that we should have filters like that. A filter for the difficulty, length, words, etc.

Just to make it easier to find what you have time for or something.


The BEST story on the site on 4/4/2017 1:21:03 PM

What do you people think is the BEST story on the site.

I, personally, don't have the time and patience to just read any story, so I decided to come to you guys to find one (or several) that won't waste my time.