UndeadLover, The Reader

Member Since

3/12/2017

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3/25/2017 6:21 PM

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7

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I like playing video games (DUH) I am a girl, You can talk to me  any time you want

Storygames

Stranded Island
unpublished

It's my first game, and very simple, please let me know if there are any errors at all!!


Recent Posts

Thanks! on 3/22/2017 3:20:59 PM

Thanks! I will definitely take a loot at these, when I can I am very limited on time.


Hello! on 3/22/2017 3:03:07 PM

Thanks I will!~


Hello! on 3/22/2017 2:05:54 PM

Well, hello! I'm new here, sort of. I've been on it for a while, just didn't have time to introduce myself. I honestly do not speak English, I speak many languages actually. French is my original language actually, but please, don't try and speak French to me. It's embarrassing, to have you try. I am trying these games, to hopefully gain idea's for books. Though i'm not officially a writer, i'm just working on my English. Though I am available on certain times, cause I am no longer, 'free'. Don't ask why, please! But well, you can talk to me at any time, and I'll try and reply back as soon as possible!!!!

 

 


The Collective on 3/22/2017 12:59:54 PM

     My name is Alyssa,  I am 14 years old. I have spent my whole  life on a boat with my parents. Mary and Michael, 32 and 36 years old. My parents have traveled the sea for years, collecting deep-sea treasure.


All I could do is run. 

 

     I soon realize that there isn’t just life on sea. There are other people in the world, and they live on land. So I sought out to find it. 


There isn’t anywhere to go.


     When I found what I was looking for. It took a few months till I reached land. I made my way around, until I got lost. I had no idea where to go. I had to ask for some help. So I did just that, then I found some pretty cool friends. 


You cannot escape them.


     They showed me around, and gave me a nice welcome. But when they found out I was going to be 15, they told me to leave as soon as possible before it hits midnight. 


They are the Collective...


     The Collective only sought after teenagers between the ages of 15 and 17. No one knows what happens to them really. They disappear for those years, until they are 18. Then they come back, completely different.


You will soon realize, the real cruelty of the world. You cannot escape. Once you're in the system, you’re stuck there. There is no escaping. You can run as long as you want, but they always find you.


UndeadLover's Poem Thread on 3/22/2017 12:58:44 PM

No kidding right, but um, like totally am not supposed to be on something like this in treatment. But I found a slip through on things, so it's not complete torture for me, especially in a 'group'. My god, you have no idea what I go through here, it's more torture than when I was free, and on the outs. 

 


UndeadLover's Poem Thread on 3/21/2017 8:52:01 PM

Soft Heart

Never thought i'd see this day,

Seeing you walk by, 

Big smile on your face,

What trouble you were,

 

Hanging with your new friends,

Passing me by,

Like I was nothing,

But the dirt you step on,

 

To miss you laying next to me, 

Holding me close,

Telling me you loved me, 

But it isn't true,

 

There was so many complications,

Between you and me,

We were never going to work,

we're both very different,

 

Your a cold heart breaker, 

While i'm a gentle killer

 

Darling Please!

I hate to admit that I miss you,

I hate to say I fell for you,

I hate to have said 'I love you',

I hate that i was fake for you,

 

We were fools to think we loved each other,

Only to be friends,

We had a strong bond,

With band aids on top,

 

You eventually fell for someone else,

I guess I wasn't good enough for you,

I fell into your little world,

Eventually falling under your spell,

 

When you left I went downhill,

You didn't say goodbye,

I thought you were happy, 

But I was wrong all this time,

 

When I heard the truth,

It broke my heart,

But I also eventually moved on,

With you still in my thoughts,

To my friend who has passed on <3

 

Hate

I hate my smile, 

I hate my laugh,

I hate my voice,

I hate myself,

 

I wish to be mute,

I wish to be covered in scars,

I wish to be free,

I wish to be alone,

 

I want to be in pain,

I want to be mute,

I want to hide away,

I want to be alone,

 

I hate society,

I hate myself,

I hate treatment, 

I hate life itself!!!


The Collective on 3/21/2017 11:05:34 AM

I know English is not my first language, but I just literally translated it, and it may not be good I don't know. But this is my prologue of my story.

                                                                Image result for Brazil teenager

              PROLOGUE

My name is Alyssa,  I am 14 years old. I have spent my whole entire life on a boat with my parents. Mary and Mike, 32 and 36 years old. My parents recently had died from lack of vitamin C, or other known as Scurvy. My parents have traveled the sea for years.

    I soon realize that there isn’t just life on sea. There are other people in the world, and they live on land. I knew my parents had originated somewhere, probably on land. So I searched in my parents stuff till I found my answer, Venezuela, Brazil. I don’t know how this seemed familiar to me. But I sought out to find it.

When I found what I was looking for. In a few months I reach land. I made my way around, until I got lost. I had no idea where to go. I had to ask for some help. So I did just that, then I found some pretty cool friends.  When I was talking with my friends, Savannah, Vale, and Miguel. I told them where I have been all my life, on sea.

They showed me around, and gave me an experience of a lifetime. But when they found out I was going to be 15, they told me to leave as soon as possible before it hits midnight. Which is in 30 minutes. They told me what happened to 15-17 years old.

The Collective only sought after teenagers between the ages of 15 and 17. No one knows what happens to them really. They disappear for those years, till they turn 18. Then they come back, different than from before. Will I be able to leave before it gets to midnight. Or will I be stuck here in Brazil, for the rest of my life.