nmelssx, The Contributor

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1st and the Last of the Ninja

Here's to a ninja choose your story...
 

You are an orphan. You do not know anything about your parents. You have never even met them before the hand of fate swept them away from you. All you know is that they died on October the 10th, the day the monstrous creature struck your village.

You remember growing up in an orphanage. Neither the adults nor the children there cared for you. Everyone avoided you for some reason. Even then, you felt like there is something you can do to change their opinion, until today. For today is the day that they have unanimously decided to kick you out.        

Note: Story's going to take me 1000 years to finish writing it, so please don't get mad if you wait and it takes forever to update.      

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1st Invigilate

You live in the town of CYS, and today's the day of the tournament. If you prove yourself to be worthy, you will get to go against four of the most powerful commanders in the history of mankind! If you beat the top commander, you will win a great prize from JJ himself, the mayor of the town!


Long Way From Home

You're a long way from home. Will you be able to earn your way back?

 

 

 

Score = How much gold you have in the end. 


To Save a Life

Your name is Ren. A week ago, your mother was hit by a car. Her organs was heavily damaged, and they need to be replace. The problem is, you don’t have enough money to afford those new organs.

 

 

 

Score = How much gold you have in the end. So, those with negative gold means that they own money, those with positive gold, but not over 100k means they lost the game, and those with over 100k means they won the game.


Trapped Inside the Tower of Hanoi

You wake up to find yourself trap inside a tower, with a man threatening to fill the tower up to the brim with water. You will drown and die inside the tower, unless you play his game...and win.

 

 

 

Score = How many seconds it took for you to beat the puzzle. So the lower number your score is, the less time it took for you to beat the puzzle. 


Last Of The Ninja (Reboot)
unpublished
Here's to a ninja choose your story...

You are an orphan. You do not know anything about your parents. You have never even met them before the hand of fate swept them away from you. All you know is that they died on October the 10th, the day the monstrous creature struck your village.

You remember growing up in an orphanage. Neither the adults nor the children there cared for you. Everyone avoided you for some reason. Even then, you felt like there is something you can do to change their opinion, until today. For today is the day that they have unanimously decided to kick you out.

Author's Notes:

This is a reboot of 1st And Last Of The Ninja. I published that story like years ago, but it had a lot of bugs in the codes, so I had to rebuild the coding structure from the ground up, using this story. I promise there will be little to no bugs in here, so enjoy.

Ninja
unpublished

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unpublished

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Recent Posts

heya! on 7/26/2017 10:10:56 AM
Well wouldnt it take forever to find your recent post if you posted in a long thread?

heya! on 7/25/2017 8:03:22 PM
Lol. Forum posting must really be a chore then.

heya! on 7/25/2017 7:52:11 PM
Why wont you see it.

Steve's Good and Evil Thread on 7/1/2017 11:47:47 AM

Sure, but there are always exceptions in life. A few rotten apples in a tree, doesn't make the whole tree bad. What matters here is the majority. Sure, all cops who don't shoot kids doesn't have to be good. But the majority of them are definitely better than the cops who do shoot kids. Do you deny that? Obviously it's an analogy. In your case though, your analogy is definitely working against your arguments. I'm not telling you what you believe in. I'm telling you what you're arguing for. And your arguing for evil characters being generally more interesting than good ones. But if it makes you feel any better, you can go ahead and keep denying it.


Steve's Good and Evil Thread on 7/1/2017 11:29:59 AM
And why are we comparing cops who rapes kids to death, to cops who shoot them, again? Your example literally has nothing to do with what you were saying earlier. We were comparing evil to good, yes? Not evil to eviler. In your case, you were literally equating good to boring, and evil to interesting, or at least more interesting than good, in most cases. Do you deny that?

Steve's Good and Evil Thread on 7/1/2017 11:16:12 AM
No, but cops who don't shoot kids are generally more preferable to cops who do shoot kids. In your case, evil main characters who are evil, are generally more preferable to you, than good main characters who are good. Why? Because, "good people are boring, and evil people less so, which makes evil people more interesting when compared to good people".

Steve's Good and Evil Thread on 7/1/2017 11:10:05 AM
Well if you paid attention to what you said earlier, you would've noticed that you also said that good main characters are boring. Implying that evil main characters are interesting. I think it matters little whether you used the word "all" or not here. We all know what you mean, and we all know that you prefer writing evil main characters to good ones. Why? Because "good characters are boring, and evil characters are interesting". You have literally said it yourself. Multiple times.

Steve's Good and Evil Thread on 7/1/2017 10:59:55 AM
Oh, so you don't know know much about it, but just some, right? Are you sure you're not just equating good to boring, and evil to interesting? That seems to be your entire case of arguments. Good people are boring, blah blah blah, good main characters even more so. Evil people are interesting, blah blah blah, evil main characters even more so.

Steve's Good and Evil Thread on 7/1/2017 10:52:57 AM
Oh. So you're saying that as long as the evil main character is interesting, it's irrelevant whether they're "necrophiliac dog fuckers" or not? Or are you saying that "necrophiliac dog fuckers" are uninteresting?

Steve's Good and Evil Thread on 7/1/2017 10:43:32 AM
Well, you're saying that writing good characters are boring, implying that you would rather write stories with evil characters. And, since a necrophiliac dog fucker is unacceptable on a "generalized cultural level", making them evil characters AND with you managing to use it as a counter example as well, well you put 2 and 2 together, and you get "Steve24833 likes writing stories with main characters such as necrophiliac dog fuckers". Really, you shouldn't be surprised.