InSaNiTy: A Jeff/Jane The Killer Story

Player Rating3.01/8

"#481 overall, #48 for 2015"
based on 109 ratings since 04/24/2015
played 1,174 times (finished 130)

Story Difficulty4/8

"march in the swamp"

Play Length3/8

"A nice jog down the driveway"

Maturity Level6/8

"I'll need to see some identification"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably between PG-13 and R.

I just wanted to make a Creepypasta Jeff The Killer game, I was bored. But, youre a normal teenage boy, that loves the woods, youll figure out more when you start the story. But, this is a VERY short story, I plan on making more then one of these so it'll be longer. Plus, there is actually three ways you dont die...the die.

Player Comments

Now I'm just thinking about a girl repeatedly stabbing a dead body and every time the knife goes in a very loud SPLAT just echoes and I lose it every time.

Anyway, it was really short. Many storygames here have plenty of potential but people lose interest and that just ruins everything. At that point, you're holding an idea somebody could use and make a better storygame out of it. It's also pretty linear, but it's actually not too bad in that area. More options would make it more fun and also longer, so you're killing two birds with one stone.

The writing itself was decent, although quite choppy. Nevertheless, it was a fun, short read. I gave it a 3/8, but I could see it being rated higher after a few revisions.

Decent job.
-- Nyctophilia on 9/27/2017 11:23:12 PM
you die in every scenario!!!
-- YamiKoi on 6/7/2017 7:41:00 PM
-- crazygurl on 6/5/2017 2:04:14 PM
Uh... I don't even know what to say. This book was EXTREMELY short, and had many grammatical errors and many possibilities to die. You didn't really describe the deaths, you just said: SPLAT and there wasn't even an exclamation point. I think that you could have done a better job.
-- DiniTheWizard on 5/29/2017 10:38:45 PM
hmm. i'm not sure how to respond to having this be a thing.....but i'm glad i get to kill somebody. *smirks* Especially if it's Jeff's target.
-- Jane The Killer on 5/18/2017 1:42:50 PM
Best game ever (NO SARCASM)
-- aisteLTU on 11/2/2016 3:30:04 PM
I love creepy pasta stories and this was right up my alie thx for this book
-- Dash on 10/18/2016 2:02:15 PM
I think I got ze lame ending...
-- Sparkle on 1/3/2016 8:35:45 PM
It has pretty good writing and enough choices to keep me invested in the story. But it was lacking one big thing: Feelings!

Showing what the character feels is what makes readers give them their empathy. In this there is only description and doesn't show what goes on inside the character's mind enough. And also the appearance of Jane/Jeff the killer is kinda random and I couldn't see any motive for them coming after my character. Though maybe I didn't see it in the path I took. But anyways a good enough game to deserve an average rating. 4/8.
-- SonicTurboTurtle on 10/26/2015 6:28:10 PM
The whole game could have been really fleshed out, so that all the endings weren't just me dying and it actually gave some answers to Jane and Jeff and why they wanted to kill people. It's an okay start, but nothing more than that. 3/8.
-- FazzTheMan on 6/20/2015 10:32:33 PM
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