a normal day...

A modern storygame by specialed100

Player Rating?/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 9 ratings so far

Story Difficulty4/8

"March in the swamp"

Play Length3/8

"A nice jog down the driveway"

Maturity Level3/8

"Must be at least this tall to play"

Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.

Player Comments

I'm not going to bother fashioning a comment as you didn't bother fashioning even one coherent sentence.

— JJJ-thebanisher on 2/1/2011 5:13:50 PM with a score of 0

One thing I liked about the story was how when you died, you went to hell rather then just ending the game. I thought that was something different. I don't know why you didn't put more detail in your rooms. One sentece rooms with no description makes it hard for a reader to get into. Your grammer was also horrible. Put more time and effort into your next story and you will have something nice.