Player Comments on American Outlaws: The Dillinger Gang

Another End To An Amazing Outlaw Carrer
-- Dan on 7/25/2019 10:47:36 PM with a score of 164200
Though I've read it once already, along with some of your other CYOA write-ups, this one always amuses and keeps my mind occupied on receiving the best Edutaiment. Well done.
-- JonathantheEthereal on 6/5/2019 2:20:19 AM with a score of 164200
It was a fun Choose Your Path story! Very entertaining and educational. I would not say it brings you enlightenment but it comes close! 7/8
-- JOJOG on 4/2/2019 6:56:54 PM with a score of 149500
score 111800
-- 06MWeigman on 3/19/2019 8:56:32 AM with a score of 111800
Great story, probably bested only by your james gang story
-- Marc on 1/13/2019 9:08:05 PM with a score of 130300
the james gang story was better
-- jo on 9/6/2018 1:36:34 AM with a score of 149300
This was very well written! Awesome job!
-- Rattler on 8/25/2018 12:48:49 AM with a score of 132900
GUNFIGHTS is 13.
INJURED is 3.
KILLED is 6.
ROBBERIES is 13.
SCORE is 164200.
This is incredibly well written, pretty much perfect, taught me quite a bit about outlaws during America's Great Depression and was above all interesting and fun!
-- William5738 on 8/5/2018 2:08:35 PM with a score of 164200
Awesome great job
-- BoB on 7/1/2018 7:11:27 PM with a score of 60000
GUNFIGHTS is 10.
INJURED is 3.
KILLED is 3.
ROBBERIES is 13.
SCORE is 64200

One of the best adventures I've had.
-- Fiemouth on 7/1/2018 11:49:16 AM with a score of 64200
GUNFIGHTS is 16.
INJURED is 4.
KILLED is 9.
ROBBERIES is 12.
SCORE is 156700.
-- JTtheSlicer on 6/25/2018 4:47:00 PM with a score of 156700
Very well-written and well-researched. Definitely worth a playthrough.
-- CaljinLeran on 6/25/2018 2:13:59 PM with a score of 164200
Excellent read, regardless if it didn't follow traditional CYOA formatting. Research elements are more than prevalent, and I'd like to thank the author for so much effort put into the story.


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Retirement in Cuba seems swell
-- JonathantheEthereal on 6/23/2018 10:17:58 AM with a score of 164200
GUNFIGHTS is 8.
INJURED is 5.
KILLED is 5.
ROBBERIES is 8.
SCORE is 132400.
-- Will on 6/20/2018 7:13:53 PM with a score of 132400
Great exciting story.
-- 2000 on 4/25/2018 3:04:00 AM with a score of 160000
Another amazing piece of work, great work Will!
-- KLeGrand141 on 4/24/2018 3:13:56 PM with a score of 156500
GUNFIGHTS is 12.
INJURED is 4.
KILLED is 8.
ROBBERIES is 11.
SCORE is 160000.
YAY! Love the way this story is written.
-- Aidan Coombs on 2/23/2018 6:30:03 PM with a score of 160000
Liked it.Good job!!
-- Persuasion on 2/23/2018 11:32:03 AM with a score of 102300
Great game. I got me some
-- Matt Pavlik on 2/1/2018 6:47:11 PM with a score of 153200
Turns out i'm really good at being a criminal! Gunfights was 10,injured 3,killed about 2 or 3. Died around the summer of 1934.(june 4 or july 4)..... 8/8!
-- Creepyguy735 on 12/30/2017 7:14:14 PM with a score of 58600
156000
-- ien on 10/10/2017 12:52:28 PM with a score of 156700
Quality story. Made it to Cuba. Fought the law and won
-- K on 7/21/2017 12:21:18 AM with a score of 156500
Interesting and well-written. Good job.
-- crazygurl on 7/13/2017 10:08:07 PM with a score of 136400
this was well written and thoroughly enjoyable
-- ted sigmund on 5/9/2017 7:18:24 AM with a score of 160000
Great game. The bonus page was a good idea
-- qawsed123 on 5/3/2017 7:03:36 AM with a score of 157600
(b^_^)b
-- Frostberg on 4/20/2017 2:43:42 PM with a score of 164200
Finished another great gang story. I loved the story, and I thought some parts were pretty suspenseful. I realized the lack of commas in several places and it bothered me a bit but other than that it's a solid story!!
-- Hanashiro on 4/12/2017 12:38:59 PM with a score of 160000
I liked it. I think the era was accurately captured. It was somewhat historically informative too, but I feel like there could have been more content. Mostly it was just robbing banks. I get that, that is what the game is. But making it longer with more fluff would have made it a little better.
-- Battlemage on 4/12/2017 6:23:30 AM with a score of 43900
How do you get 164,200?
-- The Ghost on 4/9/2017 12:05:22 AM with a score of 160000
I made it all the way through. No surrender, no retreat and "no funny stuff".
-- Dan Cooper on 3/13/2017 1:21:40 AM with a score of 132400
3 in a row of good gang stories...

Absolutely nice. You managed to retain the format of choices used in your two previous stories of gangs.

Only shortcoming was it coulda been a bit longer, but that's it. I thoroughly enjoyed your three gang stories, and I sure hope the fourth will be enjoyed as well.

Worth it all be cents stored in ze basement. 6/8.
-- AgentX on 3/4/2017 5:58:24 AM with a score of 164200
GUNFIGHTS is 12.
INJURED is 6.
KILLED is 6.
ROBBERIES is 11.
SCORE is 160000.

Huh, I killed more people than Baby Face Nelson.

As for the storygame itself; just as good as the last ones, although I found more grammar and spelling mistakes and some sentences could be re-written to flow better. But overall, it was another fantastic storygame.
-- Bannerlord on 3/3/2017 11:13:29 AM with a score of 160000
Well written and enjoyable to read.
-- Kat on 3/2/2017 10:44:43 AM with a score of 159800
I wonder how well I did. I managed to survive and not get imprisoned on my first try
-- Alex on 3/2/2017 10:12:16 AM with a score of 160000
GUNFIGHTS is 15.
INJURED is 3.
KILLED is 7.
ROBBERIES is 11.
SCORE is 162000.

Stop making these games. They're far too fun and distracting. At this rate, I'll never get any work done.

Seriously though. Kudos on another great game. Who would have thought that being a psychopathic murderer would help in being a bank robber? Apparently this guy. Way to show me what kind of robber I'd really be.
-- Tyrannosaurusrex on 3/1/2017 9:00:42 PM with a score of 162000
A very interesting game. I try not to rate lightly, but I would give this a 7.5.
-- El_Jeffiablo on 3/1/2017 7:54:30 PM with a score of 31000
Awesome game! I'm amazed I even survived at all on this one try. In the beginning I was always being as non-violent as possible and just sticking to bank robberies, but before long I ended up killing as many people as possible just to stay alive. It's interesting how it escalated like that.
-- Saika on 3/1/2017 9:11:07 AM with a score of 136600
Viva la Cuba!
-- Pogostick on 2/28/2017 5:31:44 PM with a score of 164000
Amazing work as always, Will.
-- TharaApples on 2/28/2017 5:27:13 PM with a score of 164200
How do you make these so fast, Will? XD
I really enjoyed this one, and I think I ended up killing everyone possible >~>
-- Seto on 2/28/2017 12:39:46 PM with a score of 156700
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