Are You Chicken?

Player Rating2.96/8

"#887 overall, #33 for 2005"
based on 183 ratings since 07/22/2005
played 2,611 times (finished 249)

Story Difficulty7/8

"wade in shark infested water"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level6/8

"I'll need to see some identification"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably between PG-13 and R.


This is a game to see how far you can go before you chicken out.......or die!

Player Comments

Well. This story was a lot better than I remembered it being.

First off, as apparent from the first page; you need to break up your text a little and put some paragraphs in.

The second thing I can tell from the very first page is that you haven't been proofreading your writing much, which you should really do since we are all nit picky about grammar here :P

"Exept for one which looks fine (exept for the wildly grown back and front yards)."
Though, seeing as how you spelled "except" the same way, maybe you should consult a dictionary instead.

Now, ignoring the various spelling mistakes in this storygame (and there are plenty of them), there's a few more things I'd like to point out.

The constant use of "you" as the first word of each sentence.
Take this excerpt for example;

You decide to go through the hole. You get on your hands and knees and go through. The bits of wire poke into you and make you bleed. You finally get through and look at your sores. Jamie and Alex follow. You make your way up to the house and Jamie comes up next to you. You knock on the door. Nobody answers. The door then creeks open and you walk in. You look around at the old fashoined house and you think it is very creepy. You walk over to the stair case and start going up. Alex asks "Do you think this is a good idea?". You look at her. She is usually right about this stuff but you can hardly resist going up the stairs. You say to her..."

There was 9 sentences that started with "You".
I don't know about everyone else but repetitive sentence structure is a huge no-no for me.
Try starting with a verb or combining some of the sentences.
That goes for the whole story, and definitely not just this one paragraph since your entire storygame does have the commonality of at least half of the writing on the page starting with "You".

Now, moving on; the story does have a comprehensive message of "don't pollute" (hmm I wonder if that's due to the whole "almost every single ending page has DONT POLLUTE" or a version of that :P), but I feel you really could have done more.
You basically had them vomit exposition at you towards the end, and I really would have liked a longer story and less "give you the backstories in this huge paragraph" and more maybe poke around to find out more about them.
I like this idea, I really do. But its such a letdown when the exciting part is over in 3 clicks.
At least you had a fair amount of writing and more plot than most!
-- Seto on 11/23/2017 6:13:30 PM with a score of 0
Quality Content
-- Chess on 4/11/2018 12:03:54 PM with a score of 0
Yay I lived
-- CeruleanFlare on 12/17/2016 10:22:36 AM with a score of 0
it was nice kinda twisted but good if you really think about it it could be a movie of some type but anyways nice... ??
-- anonymous on 9/6/2016 4:22:30 PM with a score of 0
I don't even know...
-- Girl America on 6/27/2016 7:17:15 PM with a score of 0
Wow. What an horrible grammar. The grammar is of an 8-year old child. And the story sucks.
-- Deadly Lion on 4/21/2016 1:50:48 PM with a score of 0
Don't pollute, kids!
-- lolitup4 on 4/7/2016 3:27:57 PM with a score of 0
Yup. Good game. Just fix the spelling and you my friend are good.
-- Brennonwilson1 on 4/4/2016 5:37:44 AM with a score of 0
SPELLING! GRAMMAR! These are the things you need to improve the most upon. For example, I have already seen a few mistakes...
-- CurseOfTime on 3/26/2016 1:00:55 PM with a score of 0
Great game
-- Seemlater01 on 3/26/2016 6:34:01 AM with a score of 0
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