Love & Dating
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"walk in the park"
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.
In this game you play April, a pretty co-ed who has been dumped by her boyfriend. Now she is ready to find new guy and your going to help her!
I noticed many grammatical errors in your book, and some dialogues which you added in weren't exactly necessary. I noticed that whenever you turned down a guy, there would be a brief paragraph about April cribbing about Eric dumping her, and that basically is the end of the game. I would change that if I were you, since that makes the game short and uninteresting as we would want another candidate to date. Like, when April was crying underneath the tree, another man could have comforted her, and then they could have fallen in love and you would have another ending. You see?
This game was somewhat amusing to me, and I liked it. Just work on your grammar, add more intricate details, and the plot wasn't really that strong nor did you develop your characters that much, so I would work on that if I were you.
I see that you put some effort in this, so well done. This certainly isn't the worst nor the best, but if you put more time and sweat into this game, it can certainly be better.
on 11/10/2017 1:37:10 PM with a score of 0
It is sooo short and it was toooo easy this is crap
on 2/16/2020 4:09:06 PM with a score of 0
it was over sooo quickly and i was disappointed. it is definitely leading you towards a specific answer.
-- kayce on 12/19/2019 6:40:11 AM with a score of 0
Not enough story sorry make it longer any of the options is one then ur don’t sorry need to make the story longer and deeper, like go through a whole year of college like classes and study time and love and even sexual part too would be great
on 11/27/2019 12:28:27 AM with a score of 0
This game is absulute trash
on 10/6/2019 5:23:34 PM with a score of 0
Good for You to poop on
-- Rose on 9/23/2019 10:24:44 PM with a score of 0
Would've loved to live happily with Marc!! XD
-- Tara Lynn Nikoma on 8/28/2019 1:38:45 AM with a score of 0
Ummmm.... Very,very boring
-- Cookie fan on 8/25/2019 3:49:38 PM with a score of 0
It's really short, but enjoyable.
-- someone on 7/31/2019 9:25:03 PM with a score of 0
kinda fucking short lmao
-- Kaytee on 7/26/2019 8:29:48 PM with a score of 0
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