Love & Dating
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played 28,714 times (finished 1,702)
"walk in the park"
"A nice jog down the driveway"
"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.
In this game you play April, a pretty co-ed who has been dumped by her boyfriend. Now she is ready to find new guy and your going to help her!
I noticed many grammatical errors in your book, and some dialogues which you added in weren't exactly necessary. I noticed that whenever you turned down a guy, there would be a brief paragraph about April cribbing about Eric dumping her, and that basically is the end of the game. I would change that if I were you, since that makes the game short and uninteresting as we would want another candidate to date. Like, when April was crying underneath the tree, another man could have comforted her, and then they could have fallen in love and you would have another ending. You see?
This game was somewhat amusing to me, and I liked it. Just work on your grammar, add more intricate details, and the plot wasn't really that strong nor did you develop your characters that much, so I would work on that if I were you.
I see that you put some effort in this, so well done. This certainly isn't the worst nor the best, but if you put more time and sweat into this game, it can certainly be better.
on 11/10/2017 1:37:10 PM
I like how you and doug get revenge... Thats my fav part of dating
on 4/5/2019 12:57:00 PM
It was super short, it didn't have that much love and flirting in it. I hate the ending where you get drunk and die, and how when you say no you are depressed. Like just get over that dumb ass boy bitch! I don't really like this story. I'm sorry if I'm a little mean, but so when you make another story you will no to make it long and good
-- Lizzie on 3/23/2019 9:09:18 AM
-- Kiki on 2/16/2019 1:42:12 PM
it was super short..
on 2/3/2019 2:54:32 PM
Very short experience. Could use some detail or a descriptive scene.
-- Annie on 2/3/2019 11:09:47 AM
A bit short and not super engaging.
on 1/8/2019 10:13:02 PM
I really wanted to like this but it was a bit too short, and each path was only two options, there really was no depth in the story, and I finished this in less than a minute (every option)
I'm sorry, no offence to the author of course!
-- Genny on 8/26/2018 5:55:50 PM
Really short. Didn’t enjoy playing
-- Anon on 8/9/2018 8:21:08 PM
It is bored
-- Zahirah on 7/31/2018 3:49:12 AM
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