Player Comments on Empty Space

I’m not sure I understand what’s happening here. I read the intro page and I expected this to be a game that had links back to the start when you hit the end. Well, I played through and there was no link back to the start. So I’m not sure what happened or what I’m actually supposed to do. I get that the story is supposed to be random, but there does come a point when it might be a little bit too random.

I’m not sure I understand the point of the game over links. Were they supposed to tell me something? Was I supposed to learn from them? I did not. There was a lot of, well, nothing here. I mean I kind of get that that’s the purpose of the story, but there’s really so little here and it’s so random that I don’t understand the point. I mean, I even found the so-called “true” ending, but it still didn’t make any sense whatsoever. Maybe that was the point, but this seemed quite a bit too out there to connect with on any level. Maybe something more along a reveal at the end about what was happening, or where you were, or where you were going, or where you ended up, or heck, just about anything more would have been nicer because it would have at least had a completed ending.
-- Ogre11 on 7/24/2018 8:33:36 PM with a score of 0
Ummm... What exactly do I get from this? All I feel I get from this is .001 IQ for solving the riddle on my first try (not the first "Game Over". It would be my third "Game Over" that I won).

You have to die at least twice, eh? You just scared most people away from actually trying to beat the game with those death links. Some might, but others will just farm points from you. Basically, game over links like the ones here are bad.

The way you have some of the words written (in a column; good example: Where it said "come" and you tried to ask what's happening or whatever) is unique, and easy for my eyes to just travel down, though a bit overdone in some places. This relates to paragraph breaks. Please just try to make words from the same sentences all in one (not present in above example) paragraph.

It seems like a storygame based off a riddle to me. Have I missed something? All that happened was die twice and riddle. Um. Please expand. Your writing could be more interesting, and get rid of the early death links. They're very annoying because they force the story to be linear.
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-- Crescentstar on 12/7/2016 12:08:17 AM with a score of 0
Your grammar wasn't bad, but the pages were short and the game in itself was rather confusing. It had the potential to turn into a great mystery story if you had extended the pages.

Anyway, due the potential it had and the somewhat decent grammar, I'll rate this 3/8.
-- Claw2k11 on 11/24/2016 3:04:53 AM with a score of 0
No... Just no. >.<
-- Avery_Moore on 7/15/2020 2:59:08 PM with a score of 0
Absolute waste of my time. My 5 year old daughter tells better stories while she's on the toilet.
-- Jordi P on 12/27/2018 12:15:48 PM with a score of 0
It was annoying to have to keep going back to start manually. Perhaps it would be a good idea to add a link on the End Game pages that allows you to go back to start. That would also add to the trippy, dreamlike effect of the game.
-- Cricket on 12/22/2018 7:05:59 PM with a score of 0
Completely nonsensical. Every failure just feels frustrating and every success is confusing.
-- Aaron Highsmith on 12/22/2018 3:28:02 PM with a score of 0
What is this even supposed to be about?
-- StantheMan on 12/3/2018 3:16:23 PM with a score of 0
I like it
-- LeoCaesar on 11/14/2017 6:18:24 PM with a score of 0
"Awake Anew
You are falling.


THE


A peaceful, slow fall.


STAR


You don't know where you are going.


BURNS


"I don't know who I am"


THE


It says.


BLACK


"I don't know who I am, but I don't know who you are either."


ONE


The dime turns to ashes that float away to uncertain winds.


OPENS


You shut your eyes.


Then you open them."

What the... he..ll....o??? ;)
-- TestingJest on 10/26/2017 5:16:13 AM with a score of 0
Well, this was interesting to say the least. The death scenes can be very off-putting when you play the game the first time. But once you get the true ending it almost seems worth it.

Haven't a clue what's going on in the game, but I think that's probably the point. I found it pretty engaging once you got past the riddle.
-- Saika on 2/25/2017 3:39:12 PM with a score of 0
wow just... wow this was way too hard difficulty 4 lol it should be 8 so hard I just got bored and rated 1/8
-- TinyTerd10 on 10/31/2016 8:06:41 PM with a score of 0
Uhhh i had no idea what was going on...
-- Ginnyweasleybooklove on 8/20/2016 1:34:08 AM with a score of 0
It took my FOREVER to find the "fin" ending. Was that the actual end? I wish it was more obvious.
-- SirPetertheFox on 3/23/2016 9:52:05 PM with a score of 0
It was kinda weird, but fun. I think it should have been longer.
-- lolitup4 on 3/7/2016 3:14:27 PM with a score of 0
cool af
-- blurryfacemartinez on 1/30/2016 9:51:03 PM with a score of 0
A tad short, isn't it. Still good
-- BadWriter on 12/19/2015 10:45:52 PM with a score of 0
Not really sure what just happened there, but I liked it XD
It was fun and easy to keep up with, and I felt really smart but also really confused by the time I got that 'Fin' ending ^-^ Overall, I enjoyed it very very VERY much.
-- Fiend on 10/3/2015 9:21:42 PM with a score of 0
It was kinda good in a mystical and confusing sort of way. I didn't understand most of it because it was puzzling but it was interesting and unique.
-- Penworth on 6/11/2015 12:40:15 AM with a score of 0
Too short, but I enjoyed this.
-- CreatorX on 4/18/2015 5:40:49 PM with a score of 0
weird
-- AthenaT on 4/8/2015 5:14:40 PM with a score of 0
... Mind-blowing.
-- Malkalack on 4/6/2015 6:57:49 PM with a score of 0
good game
-- lkjh on 4/5/2015 1:44:19 PM with a score of 0
:p I can't rate it, but I won't recommend it.
-- WarriorCatsRPStories on 4/3/2015 10:29:27 PM with a score of 0
Uhhhhhhhh................
-- Pinkiepie4449 on 4/2/2015 10:40:17 AM with a score of 0
The pages are far too short, very unrealistic and random. 2/8
-- Creature on 4/2/2015 3:46:41 AM with a score of 0
I'm not sure what this dude smoked, but I sure do want some.
-- Chris113022 on 4/1/2015 11:36:53 PM with a score of 0
Very... interesting. Excellent choice of words ensured maximum impact with the minimum amount of words. This read like the introduction to a sci-fi story, I'd love to see this taken further. As it stands at the moment it is excellent, 6/8.
-- Will11 on 4/1/2015 10:34:57 PM with a score of 0
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