Fear the Psyker

Player Rating0/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on ratings since 10/09/2016
played 1,974 times (finished 117)

Story Difficulty3/8

"trek through the forest"

Play Length8/8

"Even light has to break at the rest stop"

Maturity Level7/8

"anything goes"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.

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Take control of Karth, a child with incredible powers born into a simple tribe on a feral world, as your life is torn apart by the arrival of the forces of Chaos. Fall into line as an obedient-slave soldier and fulfil your role as a trained killer, rise up against beings of pure hate and malice to try gain your freedom, or simply try to survive in a galaxy of horrors.

Well, I tried to write a Fanfiction based on Warhammer 40'000. If you're not familar with the series, don't worry, you don't need to be to play this. I hope you enjoy!

Player Comments

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Well, where to start... It's a good story like you always manage. I especially liked the humor and the daemon Mel... mel... oh Hell, I'll just call him M. He did remind me of Dendrin from Eternal, but I love both of those characters. I do wonder why M focused so much on our protagonist (though a bit was cleared up in a certain ending). I hope to see you developed their relationship if you ever make a sequel because I'd love to see more of our friendly daemon.

Fay is a bit of an interesting character. At first, I believed that you would take that character in plainly romantic directions due to... her original state of dress. Nonetheless, their relationship is mostly just two warriors and friends which I found refreshing (though there are ways to make their relationship a "relationship"). Her character development was lacking, for she was simply our protagonists' loyal, tough friend. The most interesting aspect of her that I found was *semi-spoilers* when she asked to be a couple. Regardless of the answer being yes or no, she would state that she agreed and wanted that answer *End Spoilers*. I believe that all she wanted was to make Karth happy which is a very nice thing to do in a very dark galaxy.

Speaking about the galaxy, I like the way you created this grimdark world. Everything's basically either corrupt, trying to kill, or doing both. The leaders of the various factions were all quite memorable which is a strong feat since there were so many of them. I was never lost or confused about the world, though I certainly have not much of a clue with what is beyond the very little of the universe that Karth has already seen.

The one major problem I have is the linear nature of the game. Much like Necromancers' non-demon path, the two options are either die and end the game or live and continue on with the storyline. Perhaps I missed something, but the only major variation that I found, from making opposite and surviving choices in two different play-throughs, was through on-page scripting. Nonetheless, your rather amazing writing abilities and the 8/8 length more than make up for this sole fault I can find with Fear the Psyker.

Finally, this is a fanficion... Damn, that's impressive. If it wasn't for the fact that you said that this is fanfiction (and my previous knowledge on Warhammer), I'd have no idea that this is FF. At least at the time of this posting, CYS needs some really good games to enter this category, and I am very thankful that you have. Hopefully, this shows that it is possible to actually write good ff in a choose your own story format. I give this an 8/8 especially since this is historically a less than stellar category.

Oh, also... Waaagh!
-- WouldntItBeNice on 10/9/2016 12:59:13 AM with a score of 0
I wish there were more to this I thoroughly enjoyed this story.
-- bfkinf on 12/31/2016 6:28:52 AM with a score of 0
impressive
-- deadshot117 on 11/15/2016 6:45:50 PM with a score of 0
This was an awesome game just like the path of death.
-- wil on 11/14/2016 1:41:13 PM with a score of 0
Good shiet. Write one on being a Commissar!
-- Tyrant44 on 11/12/2016 5:15:53 AM with a score of 0
Now I don't pretend to be great at grammar or any of that, but this story was clearly lacking in that department. It's one thing if it doesn't mess with the story, but some of the mistakes were so bad that I couldn't tell who the author was talking about, who was speaking, or even at times what words belonged in the sentence because the typos were so bad. Still the content of the story was very good and I hope you write again.
-- Skinnyfatty on 11/11/2016 3:16:27 PM with a score of 0
it was good, i play 40k and i enjoy it is flaf right
-- yoavkedem1 on 10/27/2016 4:49:45 AM with a score of 0
I am a Warhammer 40k fan and I loved it. I thought you did a very good job with the description and with the little details.
-- midmichiganguy on 10/25/2016 3:34:29 PM with a score of 0
A new dawn ending
-- leon1122 on 10/25/2016 2:44:23 AM with a score of 0
Possibly the best Warhammer fanfic I've ever read. needs some serious proofreading, as there are more than a few glaring grammatical errors (namely typos), but overall, the story, characters, and setting were all very well done. I look forward to the sequel (hint, hint) 7\8
-- Bob on 10/24/2016 10:46:48 PM with a score of 0
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