Player Rating4.43/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 155 ratings since
played times (finished )

Story Difficulty5/8

"run through the jungle"

Play Length6/8

"It'll be a while, better grab a Snickers®"

Maturity Level7/8

"anything goes"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.

rsz_dnd_poster.jpgExplore the world of the dragons, by living through the eyes of one.  Work In progress

Has references to Eternal and Necromancy because my world is similar to their's and they are awesome stories

COMPLETE. Story is finished, Will add more paths based on responeses

2 Endings and 1 Minor Ending

Player Comments

It's like almost every other dragon storygame on this site. -_- Add some unique elements.

There are still some noticeable grammar issues, but not too bad.

Descriptions, please. Literally, I think it took two pages for the parents to die. Explain more of what exactly happen, describe feelings at key moments, sounds made, etc, etc.

Just the simplicity of the story and typical-ness of the plot make this story boring. Every dragon story that begins with an egg or hatchling involve them breaking the egg/moving away from nest. Make it unique!

I think that this storygame could be pretty good, despite when you say you have bad English. I suppose some effort was put into the storygame, so I applaud you.
-- Crescentstar on 12/6/2016 8:24:52 PM with a score of 0
The story was good except for some parts.
The grammar was bad and made it a bit hard to follow.
-- Ade on 10/21/2016 6:44:23 PM with a score of 0
I almost threw my laptop when I saw that the first two options kill you, then I noticed the little frowny face seemed out of place, hat tip to you my fellow smartass.
-- Reaver on 8/28/2016 1:52:52 AM with a score of 0
This was an awesome story, if your confuse about the double deaths in the beginning actually click on the link rather then just complain the story is broken. I really enjoyed the story and it was a lot of fun to play.
-- Recca on 6/9/2016 1:15:46 AM with a score of 0
-- Buddy on 5/21/2016 4:28:57 PM with a score of 0
Velly good! Congrats, this was great. Me like velly much-- maybe you could make another to do with the amphibious dragons, or just legends that the main character heard when growingup.
-- Yo on 5/13/2016 11:40:09 PM with a score of 0
Not bad, I liked the fake-out at the beginning. :)
-- Jimmysutton on 4/6/2016 11:50:48 AM with a score of 0
It was okay...
-- Silverflame on 11/24/2015 12:02:01 AM with a score of 0
This is a really good story. Only problem is he doesn't get air powers anywhere. How will he create worlds with life if he can't manipulate the air he creates to make good conditions for their growth?
-- jason1stlegion on 11/10/2015 4:07:52 PM with a score of 0
Ok, nevermind, please ignore my last comment. I thought this was only 3 pages long because first I got the one sentence death page, then I checked the other page really quick to see what was there, and I mistaking key thought that is was just another lazy ending. 4/8
-- SonicTurboTurtle on 10/5/2015 1:40:10 AM with a score of 0
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