Friday the 13th

Player Rating3.24/8

"#646 overall, #10 for 2019"
based on 50 ratings since 02/12/2019
played 576 times (finished 85)

Story Difficulty5/8

"run through the jungle"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level6/8

"I'll need to see some identification"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably between PG-13 and R.

Tags

Horror

Welcome to Friday The 13th. In this game YOU decide how you die, live, or get involved in your player interactions. Make sure you are ready because this is going to be one bloody ride.

 

 

*Note: language and deaths are gruesome and may not be suitable for children under the age of 13, you have been warned.*

Player Comments

Fun. Too short.
-- Quorrah on 7/13/2019 8:59:27 PM with a score of 0
it was epic, i just imagined this like the new game
-- will on 6/4/2019 1:28:11 PM with a score of 0
i loved it
-- wilky on 5/20/2019 6:10:19 AM with a score of 0
This is... OK. I guess. I gave it 4/8. Reasons below.

First, the punctuation. You need to put a period, question mark or something after speech- not "Example", do "Example!"

Next, the length. The pages are awfully short, and there are hardly and pages.

However, it is an okay story. The bad things abut the story? Well, it was resolved very quickly, the other people died in seconds, and you didn't even say in the story it was Firday the 13h.
-- BgirlStories on 5/3/2019 1:43:51 PM with a score of 0
Thanks for the suggestion, Jaiden James Samples, and I love horror movies too. Sadly I have never seen any of the Scream movies, I'm missing out, I know. But, I am going to try and see the new one.
-- Unkindcrab on 3/21/2019 4:22:02 PM with a score of 0
I'm a HUGE fan of Friday the 13th! Do you think you can make a story from the movie Scream? P.S. horror movie fan, loved the story, and i'm only ten! No joke!
-- Jaiden James Samples on 3/18/2019 7:52:43 PM with a score of 0
It’s not bad for a first story, though it was rather bland. I didn’t really grow attached to any of the characters, and there really wasn’t enough to keep me interested. You introduce these characters and never give them background or descriptions, so I was more than a bit confused while reading. Mostly, it wasn’t very bad. The content level on each page left a little to be desired, though the layout of the story wasn’t absolutely terrible. The plot was thin and mostly linear, and I have a feeling you didn’t map out the endings. The overall vibe I get from this is that you made the game in a few nights and then published it. I can tell you have potential to hone your skills, so consider unpublishing and working a little harder to make this into a real, breathing story!

There’s always a lot of room to improve! And especially here at CYS we have lots of tools to help you. I wish you well on your writing journey. :)
-- At_Your_Throat on 3/11/2019 10:27:05 AM with a score of 0
I would say this is silly. Firstly everyone dies with no reason and secondly you didn't mention anything about the guy in the hockey mask. Overall it was a story which is about a guy putting everyone to death with no detail. 1/8
-- StoryTurtle on 2/20/2019 4:15:55 AM with a score of 0
I thought it was actually pretty good, and full of potential, but I think you should work on making a longer story. This was like a 15 minute episode to a tv show, though I was expecting a movie. I got the PE ending. It’s fun but you should definetly add on! I look forward to the sequel.
-- CrazyCraz3R on 2/18/2019 2:51:03 PM with a score of 0
"You decide to run since Sammy is probably dead anyways."
Yeah screw that whiny little shit.

Got the death where your arm gets sliced "in half". Not sure how much of a chad this dude is to get his arm chopped then keep running like nothing happened. But with badassery like this he easily should have been able to kick Jason's ass.
-- corgi213 on 2/16/2019 5:22:00 PM with a score of 0
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