Ghost House

a Horror by Jimson

Player Rating3.40/8

"#455 overall, #15 for 2008"
based on 125 ratings since 06/02/2008
played 1,746 times (finished 154)

Story Difficulty6/8

"wandering through the desert"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

A man is Trapped inside his own home, Will he ever Escape? You play the man.You are the demon, then you become a zombie.

Ok but seriously a nice Beginners Puzzle game, Don' t think It's a game for beginners but A game made by a beginner...

Has some cursing and adult material, Mostly Death related.

Player Comments

Even if this was your first storygame, I'm not holding back on this one. I feel offended by the sheer amount of abbreviations in this storygame. The one I saw the most was "thru", and that really irks me. This is a writing website, and such use if language is an insult to our community. Storygames like these need to go before they taint our site.

The writing is a mess, and I find it really difficult to focus on the storygame itself because of how poorly written it was. There wasn't even really an idea behind it at all. There no plot, so that makes this even worse. I hate storygames where I click two or three links and it's over, so that's dropping your rating as well.

Honestly, if I wanted to read shit like this, I'd just head over to Kingskills and have him write me a novel. I wouldn't be surprised if this dickfart of a storygame was actually written by him. Half of the words in this are spelled incorrectly, abbreviated in an annoying way (like you're texting your friend and you're so lazy you don't feel like typing the whole word), or just completely unrecognizable. Grammar is also a big issue and this needs to be fixed immediately.

I'd just like to add the fact that adding an option to kill myself is just retarded.

-- Nyctophilia on 2/28/2017 5:05:34 PM
rape me
-- bitchbaby jr. on 5/17/2018 10:38:16 PM
kill me in a sexual manner
-- bitchbaby on 5/17/2018 10:33:30 PM
Grammar errors. I liked the humor. The story needed more details in order not to be confusing. Perhaps more choices could have been offered.
-- Aa on 3/15/2018 4:27:48 PM
Man I would have killed myself too. Reading that was awful.
-- bcr101 on 1/21/2018 5:58:31 AM
Oh God. Please proofread and edit. The spelling, punctuation, and grammar are bad enough that they impair the reader's ability to understand the text.
-- crazygurl on 6/7/2017 12:36:11 AM
Lots of good humor, I believe this probably the only story that I wanted to find all the deaths in because they were so funny. There are some spelling and grammar errors but nothing to egregious. There isn't much here but what is here is pretty good.
-- BigRonn77 on 11/17/2016 3:32:07 PM
And the entity opens a dimensional door, sucking the house and the characters into another be continued... Way too short, but it was good enough for a snack.
-- crusader on 7/2/2016 3:40:45 PM
I kept killing myself xD
-- Seto on 6/15/2016 12:01:06 PM
Not bad for a first story, make it longer and it could get a 5 or 6/8.
-- Read4Ever on 5/15/2016 7:47:26 AM
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