Herobrine

Player Rating3.78/8

"#504 overall, #41 for 2011"
based on 364 ratings since 10/17/2011
played 3,832 times (finished 311)

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level1/8

"appropriate for all ages"
Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.

Mysterious times call for mysterious measures.

Player Comments

It was pretty good, I suppose.

The writing overall was definitely pretty good quality, but the plot was a tad strange and didn't really feel like a good storygame subject. I really did enjoy your writing, I just kind of wish it wasn't about a minecraft ghost that doesn't exist.

The storygame was very linear at some points. Some of the page transitions were a bit tough to understand since a few details were often left out.

The characters didn't exactly have a lot of development, so I recommend if you write another storygame you give the characters development and personality. That being said, you did have a bit of an excuse here, since the only real characters were the protagonist and the mysterious Herobrine.

The grammar and spelling was very good, and I didn't see any errors in my playthrough.

I didn't see a lot of branches that actually impacted the storygame significantly, so it didn't feel much like a CYOA.

Overall, you definitely put effort into this, but it still has many cons. I hope you write more in the future. 3/8.
-- MinnieKing on 7/25/2017 3:23:02 PM with a score of 0
Your grammar and spelling weren't bad by any stretch. You also weren't lazy - when two options led to the same eventual outcome but with different means of getting there, those means would be accounted for on the outcome page (some authors will not bother making changes to the outcome page, leading to inconsistencies).

With that said, your storygame was linear. Having multiple choices on every page is pointless if every choice leads to the same outcome.

The pictures were mostly broken, but the ones that were showing up didn't always match the situation. The opening scene is dense fog and your picture shows a forest on a sunny day. The positioning of the pictures was also a little weird.

I also want to know how the main character was able to craft a sword, shield and armour in the middle of the woods.

You obviously put some effort into this storygame but none of the choices impact how the storygame plays out, and there is very little plot or character development.
-- October on 3/12/2013 12:06:50 PM with a score of 0
Well I actually liked the story until right at the end when I kept going back to find a better ending... and there wasn't one. Was kind of annoying. There's some other games where you ultimately die no matter what you do, but they tend to have some deaths that're better than others. The ending in this game just felt like I'd lost.
-- Briar_Rose on 11/27/2012 11:23:19 AM with a score of 0
YOU HAVE UNO YOU FUCKING DICK! Why did you say hell? Maturity is 1 and wheadf
-- Nigger on 6/6/2019 7:28:41 PM with a score of 0
I was quite good. But there's only one ending.
-- Willy on 5/31/2019 5:54:28 AM with a score of 0
so epic! ni got realy scared cuz i thought there would be a creeper but tjhere wasnt thank god i enjoyed very muvh plz mske another. i relly wanred a hero brian fan fickshun for long tome and noe habe ome!!@!
-- nick on 5/9/2019 2:41:34 PM with a score of 0
very sexy story i loved the part where i dated herobrine!
-- KINGKROOL on 4/5/2019 2:08:50 PM with a score of 0
Fun
-- jbyker on 9/10/2017 6:44:17 PM with a score of 0
I died the end. XD my choices weren't the best.
-- Chickdove on 12/23/2016 1:55:20 PM with a score of 0
THAT WAS SO COOL (lol) =)
-- MinecraftiaPvP on 4/22/2016 3:25:42 PM with a score of 0
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