Love & Dating
, #42 for
played 12,139 times (finished 714)
"run through the jungle"
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
"choking hazard for children under 4"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 6. To compare to the movie rating system, this would be G.
You're a girl named Katie. Just moved to a different school. Your game motives are to get a boyfriend, a friend, and a way to go to the party. Sorry if it's not good. It's my very first one, and I didn't real know what to do. Anyways- I tried my best! Thanks for playing it! [:
The story was too short. I feel like it was a good idea at first but came out terribly in writing. The choices make little sense and this is one of those storygames that makes you go back if you don't pick the right choice. These are the worst and most annoying storygames to play and it's tedious to get through so that I can rate and comment. Changing this can help get more reviews and ratings so that you can have better feedback to improve your writing.
The plot wasn't very good, and that is also linked to the choices. It seemed a little random as well, and I wouldn't recommend this to anyone unless I had no other options. This could certainly be improved and become one of the better storygames on the site. It could at least be moved into the better half.
Overall, it's a storygame lacking important qualities and I have no better option but to rate it very low. 1/8, needs work.
on 9/27/2017 9:07:39 PM with a score of 0
Unlike some people I actually read this thing carefully before rating. For instance ThisisBo, the very first line says that "You're a girl named Katie" If thats not telling the readers that the protagonist is a female from the very beginning then I dont know what is. There were very few typos, which is realy rather rare for a game that was made so quickly. The story also had a good amount of humor, or at least I think it did. With all that said there are some short comings. First the story itself is too linear. each time I played it I either got the best possible ending or it started me over. Additionally the game is to short. In the future try to have more pages, more words per page, and more links per page. The other thing I would suggest is having several endings, and I dont mean, "oops you lost" endings either.
on 6/29/2011 10:58:03 AM with a score of 0
Ha, Ha! This book was really funny but I'm a boy!??
Make more stories like this but have a boy character sometimes be the chooser, please.
on 11/27/2019 8:42:30 AM with a score of 0
Way to short and need of the story.
on 11/27/2019 12:35:52 AM with a score of 0
i liked it but ive heard better. to me it was short. fast love ya know?
on 10/6/2019 4:54:40 PM with a score of 0
It is good and bad at the same time
-- Ivy on 9/23/2019 10:20:49 PM with a score of 0
I HATE IT
-- Rose on 9/23/2019 10:17:37 PM with a score of 0
It was really 2 short for me and i expected more DRAMA!!!!
-- Mia on 8/30/2019 2:40:25 PM with a score of 0
That was good! I liked it, this was actually better than the second story. One thing I was annoyed about was that the choice of when you vet to school was only limited to following a random person for you to continue with the story. Keep writinv, don't let the bad comments get you down! 4/8
-- Ihaveaaccount on 6/14/2019 5:22:58 PM with a score of 0
I loved the story but maybe make it longer?
-- abigayle on 5/9/2019 10:21:13 AM with a score of 0
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