Love & Dating
, #45 for
played 9,849 times (finished 561)
"run through the jungle"
"A nice jog down the driveway"
"choking hazard for children under 4"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 6. To compare to the movie rating system, this would be G.
You're a girl named Katie. Just moved to a different school. Your game motives are to get a boyfriend, a friend, and a way to go to the party. Sorry if it's not good. It's my very first one, and I didn't real know what to do. Anyways- I tried my best! Thanks for playing it! [:
The story was too short. I feel like it was a good idea at first but came out terribly in writing. The choices make little sense and this is one of those storygames that makes you go back if you don't pick the right choice. These are the worst and most annoying storygames to play and it's tedious to get through so that I can rate and comment. Changing this can help get more reviews and ratings so that you can have better feedback to improve your writing.
The plot wasn't very good, and that is also linked to the choices. It seemed a little random as well, and I wouldn't recommend this to anyone unless I had no other options. This could certainly be improved and become one of the better storygames on the site. It could at least be moved into the better half.
Overall, it's a storygame lacking important qualities and I have no better option but to rate it very low. 1/8, needs work.
on 9/27/2017 9:07:39 PM
Unlike some people I actually read this thing carefully before rating. For instance ThisisBo, the very first line says that "You're a girl named Katie" If thats not telling the readers that the protagonist is a female from the very beginning then I dont know what is. There were very few typos, which is realy rather rare for a game that was made so quickly. The story also had a good amount of humor, or at least I think it did. With all that said there are some short comings. First the story itself is too linear. each time I played it I either got the best possible ending or it started me over. Additionally the game is to short. In the future try to have more pages, more words per page, and more links per page. The other thing I would suggest is having several endings, and I dont mean, "oops you lost" endings either.
on 6/29/2011 10:58:03 AM
Short and to the point. Also I had a hilarious ending. Really enjoyed it
-- Sugar on 2/4/2018 3:39:12 PM
too short and many spelling mistakes.
on 11/2/2017 12:51:41 PM
I loved this! Maybe you could make it a little longer but rather than that it was good! maybe have more endings too because it's either best ending possible or restart. Nice job though!
on 10/20/2017 1:20:43 PM
I hate How some choices lead you back to a previous part
-- bob on 9/25/2017 6:05:58 PM
*gives two enthusiastic thumbs up*
on 6/19/2017 9:02:58 PM
I think this is a good story but a lot of the time you get grounded or have detention which is a bit annoying. Overall, this is great. Keep up the great work :)
-- Me on 6/6/2017 5:34:11 PM
Grounding isn't akin to death-- it doesn't stop your life in its tracks. It makes things more difficult, but you still have to go to school after. And frankly, if an option is just going to lead to a dead end instantly on the first page, it really shouldn't be there.
-- Dude on 4/12/2017 3:12:37 AM
This actually wasn't that bad at all. There were lots of different routes - once you got past the beginning segment, that is. I found those parts pretty satisfying, and it's fun once you actually reach the good ending.
Up to that point, unfortunately, it can be a bit frustrating. You shout at your brother, you're grounded and game over. You come home with a guy, you're grounded, game over. You wear the wrong uniform, your mum grounds you (???) and...game over. Yeah.
Well, anyway. I liked it but it can certainly be improved.
on 4/1/2017 8:27:04 PM
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