In the Beginning
"Too few ratings to be ranked"
played times (finished )
"no possible way to lose"
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
"need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.
My entry to the Chaos Contest.
I really think the premise is unique and interesting. I wish there was more content. Overall, really creative and I'd like to see more by you.
on 7/11/2017 5:14:46 PM with a score of 0
Congrats for this amazing game. Continue like that and have a a great time making of these games,
-- Chxcken on 5/7/2017 1:37:53 PM with a score of 0
I really like the idea behind your story, it started really promising. Unfortunately, the shortness, and abrupt endings (as in, no 'real' end-game links) make it feel more unfinished than properly-written.
I understand that you might have rushed this story, to be able to submit it in time for the Chaos Contest, but I do hope you'll continue working on it some day, and expand it into a proper story. As I said, the idea is nice, and with work this could become a great simulator game.
on 5/3/2017 10:26:07 AM with a score of 0
Copying and pasting over my comment from another game of yours because it's as relevant here as it was there. "Really nice concept, but direly needs content. This is currently a five minute game that shows a lot of promise, would love to see a larger version of this."
on 5/3/2017 7:16:44 AM with a score of 0
Seemed very rushed but the idea was interesting. If it had been further expanded it could've possibly been interesting. Definanetly needs more depth and choice.
on 5/3/2017 5:31:49 AM with a score of 0
This was a neat idea... but it feels as though you just rushed out a few two-option pages to get this in before the deadline.
No real choices that actually have any meaningful impact on anything.
on 5/1/2017 11:43:37 PM with a score of 0
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