Mommy, Can I Go Out and Kill Tonight?

Player Rating7/8

"even better than Reeses' Cups®"
based on 754 ratings since 01/11/2007
played 27,345 times (finished 758)

Story Difficulty7/8

"wade in shark infested water"

Play Length8/8

"Even light has to break at the rest stop"

Maturity Level7/8

"anything goes"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.

Mommy Header 2v. 1.2

- Entire new story line added, with secret items to be found throughout story. The items portend a sequel which is only obliquely related to this one, and without these items one cannot logically progress.

- Fixed major bug allowing readers to exploit statistics. Thanks those who PM'd me after reading that I'd prefer that than posting on the main forums.

- Fixed multiple typos/variable issues/grammatical errors.

- Minor updates to items and setting to reflect current societal technology.

- Fixed multiple instances where traits could be used when user did not have them or stats were not high enough.

- Incorporated new spacing bugs into story, unfortunately. Probably updated Firefox and new HTML, uncertain. Don't have time to go through and delete every new <br> and <p> so ignore any new spacing issues although drives me insane if it makes you feel better.

- With any update comes new bugs. If you find some, please PM me.

Background:

You were a good boy. But then you turned bad. Drug addict, cop-killer, manipulator; These are all names you could be called. But Leon helped you hide the evidence, and you were never caught for your crimes.

You, who were once so far gone yourself, now help others. You take care of them when no one else will. And yet that creature who first strayed from the path of righteousness has not disappeared. It is still part of you, a dark psychosis threatening to get out. You sometimes hear its voice at night, whispering while you try to fall asleep. An eternal battle between the dark and the light rages within your mind.

To which side will you listen during this most crucial of days?

Features:

This is an advanced game where you create a character, choosing four of seven unique traits and distributing 100 points between your three stats however you see fit. These stats and traits make for a different experience every time you adventure through the story. Stats have a direct effect on how useful each trait is in various situations, so choose a wise combination! The back-end is extremely complex, with nearly one hundred variables and over thirty unique scripts which track and update your progress, viewable on your character sheet. This sheet lists and keeps track of accomplishments you have made throughout the story, as well as updating your health, score, and any information you might find. The story also boasts twenty-three items, most useable in more ways than one, and over twenty-five distinct endings, each crowning the player with a unique title, although only three allow completion of the story. Every item's graphic has been put through Photoshop, and photos have been placed strategically throughout the 400 pages and 600 links to augment the setting, realism, and mood. Readers will rarely be prompted to use an item; rather, they will have to reason and analyze to determine the appropriate point at which to do so. Finally, if a particular reader gains special accomplishments, they will be in bold on the character sheet, and that reader will gain extra points! Try to get 1000!

Good luck, and enjoy!

CAVEAT: This story contains graphic violence, sexual images, adult situations, and drug use. If you are too young to handle this sort of thing, please do not read the story.

*Thank you for the feedback about bugs/errors/grammatical mistakes/typos. I have fixed the majority of them. Please PM me if you find any further bugs, rather than mentioning them in comments or on the forum.

Player Comments

Playing through this storygame on lunch during a very stressful day at work provided the same sort of relief one gets from running down the streets of a popular series of games with a baseball bat. Only this is so much more personal and dark. Bravo! So well written!
-- oldmankatan on 11/1/2011 2:24:08 PM with a score of 582
Wow. I'm sorry I waited so long to play this game (didn't think it would be a good idea to play at work) because it's really impressive and complex. Love the statistics and the use of the character sheet to track them and your accomplishments; it's a big turn-off when I start a game and discover I have to keep track of a lot of stats by hand.

Also liked that the correct choices are NOT random; they make a lot of intuitive sense and aren't left up to chance like picking which door leads to the exit and which leads to instant death.

Of course, now I'm going back and going to make horrible choices to see the bad endings... Great work!
-- mandichaos on 5/9/2010 12:13:22 AM with a score of 1000
Even though I couldn't find the correct ending, I still managed to have a good time with this. The storyline, and characters, everything. They are all done so well. I can't believe how well this story was done. It takes in so many mathematical formulas and creative writing traits, that if he took an IQ test, he'd have 150 or something like that. This has to be the best piece of work I've ever seen for choosing your own fate.
-- Havacoman on 1/15/2007 3:43:05 PM with a score of 294
This was really well written! I thought the character sheet was a great story-game feature, and there was really good useage of items, character traits and stats. I really liked the little extra touches in descriptions, like russian text when someone spoke to me in russian! Madglee's BFA in Creative Writing shows. Definitely a maturity level of 7 though, kids.
-- tsmpaul on 1/13/2007 6:17:34 PM with a score of 809
Fantastic game! I was a bit disappointed when I realized that having the talisman didn't actually have an effect on the ending, but it was still a very enjoyable play through.
-- AspiringAuthorCook on 5/20/2013 5:27:18 PM with a score of 955
took me a while but i got the perfect ending lol the tirck was the first secret item
-- bfkinf on 5/17/2013 1:32:32 AM with a score of 1000
It was a good story, but I have no clue as to how to get past the confrontation at Serge's house
-- Rossatronix on 5/13/2013 1:48:30 PM with a score of 320
I had the worst ending but enjoyed it, very good game and definitely one of the best I have played on the site.
-- Jgraeme1979 on 5/10/2013 1:33:10 AM with a score of 234
pretty legit
-- will on 4/30/2013 5:32:09 PM with a score of 1045
fun. but i died gotta go back.
-- mrannihalator on 4/18/2013 5:36:01 PM with a score of 319
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