Moose's colour adventure
, #69 for
played 516 times (finished 108)
"walk in the park"
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
"appropriate for all ages"
Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.
Geared for Children
A short funny story about a moose who wants to become a different colour. But which? You choose!
This was an interesting little game. Your writing was very good; I didn't notice any errors on the path I played through. The game was pretty fun to play through as well. The biggest problem for me is the length. It was over in a few pages, and the pages weren't long themselves either. If you make another story like this in the future, it is worth adding length. Stories that are this short tend to get low ratings even though the writing itself was pretty good.
on 2/17/2017 3:44:17 AM
So.... What if I was African American to begin with?
on 4/27/2016 7:49:24 PM
Um... I don't know what happened, but I turned pink.
on 10/8/2015 8:16:23 AM
I feel like I enjoyed this way more than I should have.
on 9/15/2015 4:57:45 PM
-- Gwennie on 3/30/2015 4:45:12 PM
Cereal killer? I kill cereals like Frosted Flakes?
on 2/21/2015 2:20:53 PM
The author kind of forced the reader to make "good" choices, otherwise it was the "you lose, play again" type thing.
on 12/29/2014 3:26:52 AM
-- shong on 12/23/2014 5:02:44 PM
Cereal killer? Coppers? Huh?
-- jelly on 7/17/2014 10:14:29 PM
Ugh what kind of game is this
-- jelly on 7/17/2014 10:09:20 PM
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