Rings of Stone

Player Rating4.87/8

"#283 overall, #28 for 2016"
based on 87 ratings since 07/03/2016
played 853 times (finished 94)

Story Difficulty6/8

"wandering through the desert"

Play Length5/8

"Not going to lose any sleep"

Maturity Level6/8

"I'll need to see some identification"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably between PG-13 and R.

Entry for School based contest 2016. A young adult story about a school where you learn about the magic and religion of the ancient Celts, picking from the classic RPG classes of the knight, the bard and the druid. Think Percy Jackson with more obscure gods. This entry serves as the first part of the longer story which I had planned to write for the contest.

Player Comments

Decent prologue to the true story. Can't really call it much more than that, as it stops literally as soon as you would have started the school aspect.

Characters have potential, but we didn't really have enough time to explore any of them.

It held my attention, although I hated that you used single quotes instead of double for dialogue. Some parts also seems cluttered, along with some spelling and grammar errors.
-- Killa_Robot on 7/16/2016 8:42:49 PM with a score of 0
Man. It ended just when it was starting to get good.

I felt early vibes of Harry Potter and later vibes of Percy Jackson; and while that's not altogether original I think you pulled it off. For me this is a case where the writing was far superior to the plot.

That being said, since the story hadn't quite started yet it was still well written and enjoyable; though I am left wanting more.
-- donteatpoop on 7/7/2016 2:34:35 AM with a score of 0
-- The_L on 5/27/2019 11:48:13 AM with a score of 0
make more
-- thanos on 5/13/2019 9:57:32 AM with a score of 0
I look forward to the rest of the story
-- Faervel on 2/25/2019 10:02:23 AM with a score of 0
I enjoyed this. Please make something similiar
-- Hanna on 6/19/2018 11:59:22 AM with a score of 0
Ah, it's simply too short. So I pick a stream and then the game just ends? Boring!
-- TestingJest on 9/22/2017 1:12:35 AM with a score of 0
I would love to have a next chapter
-- Dark_Storm on 8/4/2017 5:35:29 AM with a score of 0
I must say after playing this again I truly do enjoy it and hoping for a part 2!
-- MetaMason on 1/31/2017 12:02:21 PM with a score of 0
-- MetaMason on 1/24/2017 12:13:12 PM with a score of 0
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