Player Rating6.62/8

"#18 overall, #4 for 2007"
based on 16706 ratings since 10/27/2007
played 135,079 times (finished 13,131)

Story Difficulty1/8

"no possible way to lose"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level6/8

"I'll need to see some identification"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably between PG-13 and R.


 A story told in pieces of memory, about a boy, the girl he loved, and snow.


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Player Comments

Short and sweet.
In its shortness it was precise and lovely, and in its sweetness it was gut-wrenching and heart-warming
This is a story in part about duality; snow itself is beautiful, but it is cold to the touch. The story chills you and warms you, and the warmth is made more wonderful by the chill, like drinking hot chocolate after a day out in the cold.
The aspect I was most impressed with was the way the story concisely captured the essence of the feeling of snow. A story which, with every word makes you feel the FEELING of the title deeply, is cold and lovely, quiet and sad.
Criticism: The story is gripping, in a way which speaks to the lovesick teen in us; only a youth's eyes could see a character which is entirely without flaw. A character who is perfect is without depth. They will be confined to the rose-tinted fiction of the page, and never apply in a universal way to the lives of the readers. This can be hard to do in such a short format, where character development is already so minimal. I would have included one memory where she was showed to be not so stunningly, dreadfully, perfect, and then loved her anyway, loved her more.
-- dueconsideration on 8/23/2015 7:45:45 PM with a score of 0
As I began reading the story I was digging the style of your fragmented and vaguely connected bits of memory. I wondered briefly if it would get any more detailed, and was starting to think as I moved forward in the story that it wouldn't and that I would be disappointed because of this. You proved me wrong though, the emotions in this story, especially towards the end, were fantastic. Excellent use of the sites formatting. Well done.
-- donteatpoop on 9/2/2007 6:48:21 PM with a score of 0
I actually gave this an 8. A brilliant piece of clean writing. It manages to set mood in such a short amount of time, and really made me care about the characters. The romance was just that - romantic - without seeming forced or cheesy. Very clever, too, how the story is structured. Excellent, effective way to develop the characters. I really liked this.
-- madglee on 6/27/2007 7:53:56 AM with a score of 0
-- awsom fart on 2/18/2018 10:16:02 PM with a score of 0
... ... ... sad ... all i have to say... just... sad...
-- joseph on 2/4/2018 9:59:21 PM with a score of 0
-- Cooter_1a on 1/22/2018 5:50:51 PM with a score of 0
Holy crap. That is one of the best stories I have every read.
-- notaname on 1/15/2018 12:38:10 AM with a score of 0
awmazing dude keep it up
-- vfd on 1/11/2018 9:33:59 PM with a score of 0
It's a beautiful story
-- jh3828 on 12/27/2017 11:48:51 PM with a score of 0
This story reminded me of someone, even though we never made love, it reminded me of our connection. Thank you friend
-- Kevin on 12/22/2017 9:38:06 AM with a score of 0
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