Love & Dating
"even better than Reeses' Cups®"
played 30,620 times (finished 2,667)
"no possible way to lose"
"A well spent lunch break"
"i'll need to see some identification"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably between PG-13 and R.
A story told in pieces of memory, about a boy, the girl he loved, and snow.
Thank you so much. I enjoyed the beautiful melancholy of this game. The short sentences hit me like a gust of winter wind. The sad ending reminds me of how winter looks to someone inside a warm house waiting for spring. I enjoyed this very much.
-- Ariel on 4/28/2012 2:39:36 AM with a score of 0
As I began reading the story I was digging the style of your fragmented and vaguely connected bits of memory. I wondered briefly if it would get any more detailed, and was starting to think as I moved forward in the story that it wouldn't and that I would be disappointed because of this. You proved me wrong though, the emotions in this story, especially towards the end, were fantastic. Excellent use of the sites formatting. Well done.
on 9/2/2007 6:48:21 PM with a score of 0
I actually gave this an 8. A brilliant piece of clean writing. It manages to set mood in such a short amount of time, and really made me care about the characters. The romance was just that - romantic - without seeming forced or cheesy. Very clever, too, how the story is structured. Excellent, effective way to develop the characters. I really liked this.
on 6/27/2007 7:53:56 AM with a score of 0
This was the first story I read upon stumbling on ChooseYourStory. It remains my favorite. A hauntingly beautiful piece that I wish I could read for the first time again.
on 6/19/2013 8:44:40 AM with a score of 0
I can only smile. Both a sad and happy smile. A jealous smile.
on 6/16/2013 5:33:11 AM with a score of 0
It was sad, yet, it kept me reading. . .
-- Markle on 6/15/2013 5:52:17 PM with a score of 0
on 6/13/2013 2:47:43 AM with a score of 0
on 6/9/2013 11:09:06 PM with a score of 0
A nice game, could stand to be more fleshed out.
on 6/7/2013 4:10:06 PM with a score of 0
A short but amazing game, the effort put into this is just right. And the way you write down the emotions of the characters made my heart melt.
on 6/5/2013 2:37:50 PM with a score of 0
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