Snow
a
Love & Dating
by
Sethaniel
Player Rating
7/8
"even better than Reeses' Cups®"
based on
3430 ratings
since 06/27/2007
played 29,176 times (finished 2,574)
Story Difficulty
1/8
"no possible way to lose"
Play Length
4/8
"A well spent lunch break"
Maturity Level
6/8
"i'll need to see some identification"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably between PG-13 and R.
Tags
Serious
A story told in pieces of memory, about a boy, the girl he loved, and snow.
Player Comments
Thank you so much. I enjoyed the beautiful melancholy of this game. The short sentences hit me like a gust of winter wind. The sad ending reminds me of how winter looks to someone inside a warm house waiting for spring. I enjoyed this very much.
-- Ariel on 4/28/2012 2:39:36 AM with a score of 0
As I began reading the story I was digging the style of your fragmented and vaguely connected bits of memory. I wondered briefly if it would get any more detailed, and was starting to think as I moved forward in the story that it wouldn't and that I would be disappointed because of this. You proved me wrong though, the emotions in this story, especially towards the end, were fantastic. Excellent use of the sites formatting. Well done.
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donteatpoop
on 9/2/2007 6:48:21 PM with a score of 0
I actually gave this an 8. A brilliant piece of clean writing. It manages to set mood in such a short amount of time, and really made me care about the characters. The romance was just that - romantic - without seeming forced or cheesy. Very clever, too, how the story is structured. Excellent, effective way to develop the characters. I really liked this.
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madglee
on 6/27/2007 7:53:56 AM with a score of 0
Sad :(
-- Buddha on 5/21/2013 10:37:34 PM with a score of 0
This story is the best one on this site, by far. Love is so cliché, but this manages to deal with the topic in a thought-provoking and beautiful way. I feel so sad after playing this...especially after finding the 'true' ending.
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AspiringAuthorCook
on 5/21/2013 8:36:20 PM with a score of 0
Really sad ending. She died like Sirius (from Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix.)
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harrypotter
on 5/20/2013 9:48:10 PM with a score of 0
Awesome Story!
-- Topoyozada on 5/15/2013 7:59:46 AM with a score of 0
I thought it was well written, and cute, just a little short :)
-- Ellie on 5/8/2013 5:53:02 PM with a score of 0
I'm impressed. I don't read much in the genre, but you had an impact in a very short time.
-- Androgeny on 5/8/2013 1:46:38 PM with a score of 0
OMG, why did i read this? worst book ever. Dont waste yer time readinh this garbage. Im an aspiring writer and this was embarassing.
-- J0ey Rock1t on 5/3/2013 2:59:09 PM with a score of 0
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