Snow Love

Player Rating4.32/8

"#267 overall, #32 for 2013"
based on 197 ratings since 10/30/2013
played 4,196 times (finished 236)

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

You are a young girl named Alice, looking for a date to the dance night in your school; with many unexpected things happening to you on the way.

There are 2 endings to this story.

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Author's note: Hey, this is my first storygame. So enjoy, rate and comment(No hate comment plz)

Player Comments

It's better than my first game.

My number one suggestion would be to have the choices the player makes have some logical relation to the outcomes.

For example, whether or not Alice goes skating determines her sexual orientation, which doesn't make a lot of sense. It would be better if there was something like "If I go skating, maybe I'll see so-and-so there" so that the player feels like they have some control over the outcome of the story.

You show a lot of promise, keep writing.
-- Sethaniel on 8/29/2013 1:37:07 PM
Your writing varies, at some points it's pretty good, and at other points it's lacking. For example, "Quickly unlocking the door, he puts me down on the nearby couch, then quickly runs into the bedroom. He soon quickly returns, carrying some pajamas and a large blanket." You need to refine your writing. Go over and make sure things are done right.

You should also proofread more because of lines like this, "Your what?! IT'S MY LIVE! What gives you the right to tell what to do or not?"

I would like to see greater branching. The story was good enough that I'd like to explore more branches of it.
-- ugilick on 6/19/2013 11:28:48 PM
Wow that was great I'm impressed, good job !
-- twilight on 4/10/2019 4:41:37 AM
I liked it a lot and stuff but it was really much of a story it didn't give you choices except the sidewalk one and the ice one. BORIIING! I replayed it and I hated the ending where I am lesbian, ewwwwww nasty. It's so wierd like I don't like stories where you are lesbian sorry suck but make you story way better

*Also did you draw the pictures yourself?LOVE THEM!!

XOXO bye darling
-- Lizzie on 3/23/2019 3:08:49 PM
so romantic
-- PrincessStarlight on 5/20/2018 4:25:04 PM
so romantic
-- PrincessStarlight on 5/19/2018 10:27:23 PM
I. LOVE. THIS. SO. MUCH. I got Darren for the ending! Great jooooob!
-- swimminnarwhals on 10/27/2017 10:10:58 PM
I just love this stoy it's my favorite and i keep reading it over and over!??
-- Hannah on 5/26/2017 8:29:42 PM
i think that it has a decent story line and lots of choices ut it was a bit short so i gave it a 6/8
-- unequalboot on 3/24/2017 5:05:38 PM
I honenestly thouguht that this was gunna be about sexy ladys and all so im a bit dissapointed to say.
-- them love expert on 3/6/2017 7:53:42 PM
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