Snow Love

Player Rating4.17/8

"#387 overall, #31 for 2013"
based on 222 ratings since 10/30/2013
played 5,182 times (finished 284)

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

You are a young girl named Alice, looking for a date to the dance night in your school; with many unexpected things happening to you on the way.

There are 2 endings to this story.

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Author's note: Hey, this is my first storygame. So enjoy, rate and comment(No hate comment plz)

Player Comments

It's better than my first game.

My number one suggestion would be to have the choices the player makes have some logical relation to the outcomes.

For example, whether or not Alice goes skating determines her sexual orientation, which doesn't make a lot of sense. It would be better if there was something like "If I go skating, maybe I'll see so-and-so there" so that the player feels like they have some control over the outcome of the story.

You show a lot of promise, keep writing.
-- Sethaniel on 8/29/2013 1:37:07 PM with a score of 0
Your writing varies, at some points it's pretty good, and at other points it's lacking. For example, "Quickly unlocking the door, he puts me down on the nearby couch, then quickly runs into the bedroom. He soon quickly returns, carrying some pajamas and a large blanket." You need to refine your writing. Go over and make sure things are done right.

You should also proofread more because of lines like this, "Your what?! IT'S MY LIVE! What gives you the right to tell what to do or not?"

I would like to see greater branching. The story was good enough that I'd like to explore more branches of it.
-- ugilick on 6/19/2013 11:28:48 PM with a score of 0
FIN

oh look another anime story with pictures in it, nice effort in putting those in, even if a lot of them were of different characters.

Thought this was fanfic at first for what it was, as it read out completely like one.

The plot was there and carried what needed to be carried, but the description of a lot the story was kind of bare and could have had a lot more added that probably would have raised the story by a overall point.

Also lol at the sexual orientation, fucking zeus out here deciding at random whether I like dick or pussy.

also wtf did i get undressed without consent, i'm calling a hotline.
-- Digit on 3/15/2021 8:09:45 PM with a score of 0
I really liked the story. I got both endings, but me being an idiot I died once in each path.
-- Zarlox on 3/10/2021 10:44:03 AM with a score of 0
Rated a 1/8 just because of the classic and always cringe nIcE cOmMeNtS oNlY from the author. But the story itself was also pretty bad and in no way deserving of the 4+ rating it managed to get seven years ago from undiscerning weebs.

-- mizal on 10/10/2020 4:54:34 AM with a score of 0
amazing encore wooooo
-- nonexistent on 10/9/2020 10:36:16 PM with a score of 0
why was there only 1 option at most of the chapters
-- mae on 1/18/2020 1:29:34 AM with a score of 0
really i picked the wrong one and she dies where is the romance that i like like constant kissing
-- hannah on 11/11/2019 7:12:00 PM with a score of 0
Very good
-- Jessica Talosig on 8/31/2019 1:33:44 PM with a score of 0
Wow that was great I'm impressed, good job !
-- twilight on 4/10/2019 4:41:37 AM with a score of 0
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