The Boy Who Died From Eating All His Vegetables

Player Rating4.27/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 81 ratings since 01/08/2015
played 591 times (finished 84)

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level3/8

"must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.

Tags

Humor

A project for my English III class, titled "The Boy Who Died From Eating All His Vegetables"

Player Comments

Ha! I actually really enjoyed it! :D

The idea, while lolrandom, was really creative and had me laughing. It was a good, original idea and I would definitely want to read more from the author!

I was hesitant, because it seemed really random, like one of those games that try to be funny but fail, but there was a fair amount of detail I guess and it felt well fleshed out in my opinion.

It's not the longest storygame, but I guess it's not easy to make a 100 page storygame about a boy dieing from eating vegetables. Despite not having a huge number of pages, there were more then a few sentences on each page.

I can understand that this story is too strange for some people, but I enjoyed it :D

5/8.
-- MinnieKing on 3/10/2017 7:00:03 PM
Well, this was quite interesting. Well-written but the story was rather odd, but then again, I suppose that was the intended effect. Quite interesting indeed, but I now will be looking over my shoulder for aliens everytime that I eat my vegetables.

So points for originality :)
-- TharaApples on 11/6/2016 3:14:07 AM
I liked this, well written and different. It seems you might have chosen a more exciting premise for a story this well written but I guess it's semi-autobiographical or at least inspired by real events as some of the best stories are. You have a knack for writing but I think the endings could have been better and it's unfortunate that, as in real life, there is no way to get out of eating your vegetables in the end.
-- Will11 on 1/9/2015 3:05:26 AM
This storygame made me smile.
-- crazygurl on 6/5/2017 12:25:46 PM
This was actually pretty funny :D (especially the teacher ending)
-- Yuisawachelsa on 12/23/2016 9:22:23 AM
It is simple, but good. Liked it.
-- Vittorio99 on 9/20/2016 2:46:02 PM
so... it s a story about a mentally ill child? weird.
-- thebigE on 7/2/2016 3:10:23 PM
That was pretty cool.
-- Kate on 5/21/2016 6:30:50 PM
Very interesting story. I also like the names Freddy and Bonnie. LOL
-- WildeKatz on 9/9/2015 10:22:56 PM
strange but imaginative
-- Lzark on 8/13/2015 5:52:13 PM
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