Player Comments on The Thief and the Crown Puzzle

This is a puzzle game rather then a regular story, for who are asking.

I have liked your puzzle (Solved at first attempt when the time was 10!) and the little story you got there.

For me, it is a easy-medium puzzle, and I think that puzzle will be great, if you just increase the length of the story, before you get to the chest.

I suggest to keep that puzzle nearly at the end of the story and write the beginning-before chest of the story.

Overall, It's a good puzzle, and I would like to see you add more pages to the story, because it's not actually a story for me, it's just a puzzle game.

My final rating: 4 out of 8 with a smile! :)

Fun game great riddle it was pretty good. Just wish bit longer more of a solitary puzzle than story.

To be quite honest too ez

fun little puzzle!

Not a bad puzzle, but lacking in narrative support. I solved it in 2 moves on the first try, but figure I just made a lucky first guess before I figured out what each knob does.

The small amount of writing is not bad, but it provides merely a glimpse into what could be a story. It would have been nice to have the story surrounding why this item is desired more than all the other treasure. What does it do? Also, there is not much insight into the character.

Overall, very very short. Fun puzzle and scene that has the potential to be a story with a little work.

It's a cute little puzzle. I know you said that you made it mostly as a test, and I definitely do think it could work well as part of a larger game. The writing could benefit from a bit of proofreading.

I did it in two moves.....
im proud of myself

The puzzle was easy once you figured out how all the locks worked, and it had a neat little story. I look forward to seeing it as part of a larger game, as I think this puzzle was too simple to be a story unto itself, but should have been part of a collection of puzzles.

"Today the wheels of fate have been set in motion. Today the revolution begins" .

All you have to do is click lock 2 and 4 to win Plz Fix!!!

Possible to win in 2 moves, simple puzzle. Knob 4 and 5 are identical, was that intentional?

that was so close. i did it on the final try!

nice puzzle.

How did the puzzle work? I won the game in six turns, but have no clue what making them all turn one actually did. Or why that was the solution.

Solved the puzzle in 4 clicks. Could have gotten lucky, but it seems like maybe the lock should be re-designed.

Needs more substance but overall if combined with a deeper before and aft would make a decent part of a story

I sincerely enjoyed this! Yes, it's a simple game, but I don't think that it was intended to be a complex story. Very well done. Having a time limit was a nice touch.

A short and simple but not obvious puzzle. I feel like it would be a good addition to a longer story.

I only gave it a low rating bc of its brevity. It was clearly well written. If expanded upon, it should be great!

simple puzzle. would be a good addition to a much bigger story

Did this in two clicks o.o

It was easier than I thought. I just figured out what each knob did at the start of the game and solved it. Nice puzzle!

Wow, very cool, but I wouldn't really call it a puzzle. It's more like a pick-the-right-thing-or-else-you're-dead game.

First try!

That was hard. But it was cool. I liked it.

Painfully simple, got it immediately. Good job, though!

I really found this pretty easy, I actually solved it first try! I won't tell you how to solve it, because that would ruin the point of the puzzle!

It felt like a smaller part of a larger game. 5/8

Nice little game. Good to see someone designing a puzzle that works using the editor. I would like to have seen this as part of a longer story. The scene setting is great apart from a few spelling errors. 5 Mins of fun.

A very fun, and entertaining puzzle! Took me several tries, but was very great while it lasted.

easy for a Champ like me.

One of the best logic puzzles on the sight!

A fun little puzzle to do. I loved working hard at it and feeling the triumph in getting all the locks unlocked. You could probably make a sequel puzzle game out of this. Good job.

Cool concept, but insanely short

Awesome it was awesome you should put that in a story several times. sincerly, 24freddy
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I feel like if there had been an actual story here, that might have been cool. You made a nice puzzle, and you tried to give some backstory and a decent victory scene, but overall it's just one puzzle.

I honestly wasn't sure how to rate this. A very short game, but just pulling off a puzzle like this with the editor is impressive in itself. I hope you take some of the tricks you used here and apply them to a slightly meatier story sometime.

A couple typos you might want to fix:

There is no way that your descend into the dungeons of the palace

You begin solvng the puzzle...

Despite its beauty, you still feel like it does not live up to its grand name fame.

Very good use of the editor to create a puzzle, I know how difficult that can be. Other than a few minor typos, I'd say it was a successful test. Put it together with a few other types of puzzles and you would have a nice little brain teaser.
I look forward to seeing this and other puzzles put into a story in the future.

I'm so curious to see what happens next! I look forward to what you make next! I love the puzzle mechanism as well!

Nice and simple, I like it.

That was fun! And I totally didn't solve the puzzle by checking which knobs opened each of the locks and then going back on myself... That would be cheating. Definitely didn't do that.
Anyway, I'm really looking forward to playing the full game that you're working on. ^_^

Nice little puzzle, probably had more grammar errors than a game this short should have.
The puzzle seems to be a good preview for the game you're making, and I'm interested to see how this ends up.

Very good game. The story was a little vague, though, as to how claiming the crown is supposed to solve all of the thief's problems.

Pretty easy puzzle.