Underground to Canada

Player Rating4.06/8

"#427 overall, #38 for 2013"
based on 122 ratings since 04/01/2013
played 916 times (finished 122)

Story Difficulty3/8

"trek through the forest"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level2/8

"choking hazard for children under 4"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 6. To compare to the movie rating system, this would be G.

This is a project I made for school. I've updated it a bit since last time, adding some more choices to the story including a bad ending and a sorta-bad ending. It is about you, a slave who will escape to Canada. There will be a variety of dangers including slave catchers and starvation. Have fun!

Player Comments

I liked this storygame, and it wasn't bad at all. It is very good for your first storygame and I'm sure you received a nice grad for it as well. I do have some issues with it, but I understand that (as it's a project is sue at a set time) that you were limited by your teacher in creating this. Now that's this is over, I advise updating it for a better rating.

I think that your individual sentences could be improved, and one way to do so is to combine some of them into one. They are all short and make the writing choppy, with no flow or structure.

There were some moments where choosing an option was like choosing a path blind. There was no clue as to what would happen in some cases, but there was one where you hinted that staying behind could possibly get you caught, so that was better.

There is a few mistakes in spelling in grammar, so a bit of proofreading and maybe someone else's help with that can get the job done. Remember to always check over you work so that you're completely sure you didn't miss/mess up anything.

-- Nyctophilia on 2/26/2017 9:48:46 PM with a score of 0
THat was pretty cool
-- Grace_Willis_13 on 3/29/2019 1:34:52 PM with a score of 0
Good job, keep up the god work!
-- MusicalNerd7 on 5/30/2018 7:50:44 AM with a score of 0
-- no on 10/16/2017 7:11:35 PM with a score of 0
It was really fun!!!
-- Kat on 10/11/2017 4:00:46 PM with a score of 0
Interesting. More options might make it even better!
-- Quorrah on 1/12/2017 1:21:33 PM with a score of 0
I got stuck in a loop.
-- MinnieKing on 12/16/2016 4:32:31 PM with a score of 0
I have dedicated my entire life to the Reese's name, and have loved it more than anything. I married into the Reese's family, and it is where all my pride stems from. In addition, my favorite part of the Reese's brand is the Reese's Cup. I never thought anything could ever top it-that is until now. Me and my son Reese Reese's absolutely loved this adventure, this and empty Reese's cup wrappers are the only things we bond over anymore (hes a fucking douchebag"
-- Reese's Cups on 6/10/2016 6:41:39 PM with a score of 0
great book but its a bit to easy and short for my tasre but still a great book non the less but overall i liked it though changes could be made.
-- Samuel on 4/17/2016 12:09:34 PM with a score of 0
-- QlhAah123 on 11/12/2015 6:14:47 PM with a score of 0
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