Woolf stone

Player Rating3.59/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 29 ratings since 12/12/2016
played 135 times (finished 33)

Story Difficulty3/8

"trek through the forest"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level3/8

"must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.

A story I created for my college class:
Follow the clues through the story and try to find out who took the jewels from Virginia Woolf's Library!
There are six characters who will lead you around the house and to the answer as to who stole the jewel. To figure out this story you will need to know the stories, "The Importance of being Earnest", "The Odour of Chrysanthemums", "Confessions of an English Opium Eater", and "The Chimmny sweeper". Good luck!

Player Comments

It was well written and all, with few spelling mistakes but there was one major issue I only gave it a three. There were no choices.

Sure, there were about three links on every page, which simply lead to one sentence before taking me backwards. That isn't writing, it's just forcing players into picking until they find the path that makes them progress.

I'm not trying to be mean, just constructive. In these types of storygames, people expect choices. However in this, there was one real path, multiple dead ends, and I counted one ending after playing three times.

I think there should be some way to actually lose, because this seemed like it was some sort of challenge and mystery to find the right person, but it simply took me back over and over until I chose the right one... Although you supplies clues I guess, there should be at least one bad ending.

Not badly written, but there were a fair amount of mistakes, and this didn't quite strike me as amazing. I guess I sorta enjoyed it, but it needs more paths and branching.
-- MinnieKing on 12/12/2016 11:19:17 PM
Fun. Easy. Enjoyable. Too many spelling errors.
-- Quorrah on 1/11/2017 5:15:13 PM
Hmm...much better than I expected, though you kept using strange spellings of certain words :)
Such as "hopping" instead of hoping, and "jem" instead of gem.
-- Seto on 12/12/2016 6:47:16 PM
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