I admit I did get hurt a little , but I'm not gonna give up just because someone criticized me . I'm actually thankful for the harsh critique cause that will motivate me, and help me improve my writing skills to not disappoint you guys . <3

I wasn't a troll , I really was just trying to get help . 

although your words kinda hurt me , I will try my best to write a story worth reading for you guys .

i wasn't arguing i was just stating my opinion :) 

and thanks again for your help ! 

no one will win -_- 

just chill dude , 

btw I'm still trying to figure out how to attach a photo to my story as a cover 

rest assured hon ! :)

at least all i need to fix is my English but you .....

you need to fix that attitude of yours. you know , this being a writing site and all . 

i agree ! 

how did you conclude that ?  

and to answer your question , English is indeed my first language so you guessed wrong .

:)

yeah i was kinda confused since I'm new here ... but i really appreciate the help . so thank you so much!! 

thank you for the detailed explanation ! i get it now 

and thank you guys soooo much for the help ! 

i hope my story doesn't disappoint you . 

i'll try working really hard on it <3

so how do i make decisions in my story?? i need detailed explanation PLEASE!