Gothic horror themed story with lightstar.

you are a scribe named (insert name when I come up with it). After finishing you head off with (insert friend's name.) to collect your fate shard. But when things go awry, somebody must pay.

sentient herpes? Hmmmmmm. ideas. Oh I know, I could have a sentient space parasite (not like an sti). Possibly hidden in plain sight.

Interesting. But I'm curious toward the microrganims. What do you suggest they do. 

sorry, auto correct.

1. just general stuff like the universe, the civilizations, the pirates, and the planets

I've been working and tossing ideas around for a story. It's supposed to be a space epic that has you transporting something to the unknown universe to a small colony of researchers. If anyone has any lore ideas (not plot since I already have that down), that would be greatly appreciated.

avatar is aimed towards everyone, but i guess it falls into the kids show category. (Iroh is the best)

I've seen this in several stories. I find that it works fairly well, as long as you don't do it to often as it does in your words "take you aside" and if it happens to often it may break the experience. but seeing as I'm probably going use this (probably ignoring all my advice) go ahead.

best show ever (well "kids show") but there is a lot of depth. i suggest you watch it

thanks

create a miniature thread from your story. To add context, I mean a small choice that you make that then brings you to a little bit of text that brings you back to the story (A-B-C-A) instead of (A-B-A)