Could I trouble you to try the game, and tell me where we can fix problems so we can keep players interested? If this is not the type of game you play then your opinion really matters. Because I want to attract players that don't play these types of games. 

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You hit the nail on the head. That's one of the problems we are having. When we have an ending in mind, we write to get to the end. So we have to follow a formula or we could end up writing 5 different endings for one story. Honestly, I don't think that is a bad thing. Choices made should reflect different outcomes in a story. Even if there are 3 endings. Its better than tying everything to one. My opinion the story feels forced if the writing is weak. Which is the trap I found myself in. 

I'm down for YouTube, but my company has to let me start pumping out videos. Even if they're just teasers. Btw love your profile pic!  

Can anyone recommend other sites where I can an awesome forum group like this one? You all have been great, and the feedback has been top notch.

We do have an art team that will make the characters and scenes based on the writer's descriptions. We do have to have a limit of around 10 to 15 characters. NPC's we can cheat. Like all shopkeepers can look the same unless there is one shopkeeper that holds importance. I think it would be great to leave descriptions for the narrator to use and move the story along. Also, it's a good way to cheat the word count for the chapters.   To answer your question about future stories. Consider new stories as standalone. What we did in the past stays in the past. What you do is the here and now. If the story is popular and readers want more. You write a sequel and move forward from there. If the opposite is true. Write a new story and see where that goes. I've written 5 stories and they all flopped LOL. That's not true College Desires has been doing good but I helped write that story. I can't take full credit for it. But I move on because I like writing. To answer your other question for technical parts. We have guides and samples stories you can study. We also send a simple test which is 100 lines of dialog. The first 25 lines have the full rundown. You see how choices are written and how they lead back into the main story. You see how we write ID's for characters, scenes and facial emotions. On line 26 you take over the story from there to line 100. You send it back to me and I go over the finer details of what to look out for. Error, mistakes or answering questions you had while writing the story. Once the test is done. All the technical parts just become repetitive eyes sores lol.  I hope I answered your questions.

You have a solid idea, want to plant that seed and watch it grow to into freaking unimaginable dream?

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Hold on to your hat, but we let you make us an offer for payment. Skills and talents are snowflakes each is unique. All are beautiful. So who I'm to place a value on something I can only appreciate from a distance. I only ask for reasonable offers because we have to build trust as we work together for the first time. If the first team up is successful then, by all means, ask for more. Make an offer based on the workload and time it would take to complete.  For 15 chapters 4000 words per chapter with a 2-week timetable to complete the story. Adding choices for the players to choose from during the story. Meet these goals and you're golden.