VolJin, The Reader
Member Since
6/10/2012
Last Activity
5/1/2014 4:01 PM
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Yo, I iz greats!
Storygames
Dummy
unpublished
Dummy story.
Made to see what I can do here.
Don't take it seriously
Recent Posts
Who do you think should be able to give trophies? on 6/17/2012 8:55:17 AMEndMaster, Mithex, Marmotlord, ThisisBo and Romulus
Zombies Ate My Brain! on 6/10/2012 5:35:15 PM
add meeee add meee add meee!
I'll bne a creepy guy who tries to fend off the zombies with voodoo, but gets eaten and transforms into a zombie shaman, who carries a lollipop and a magic pen!
One of the best comments I've gotten in a while on 6/10/2012 1:10:53 PM
look what comments I GOT I'm great, ain't I?
Not the best I've played.
It's really short, the pages aren't that long, and I can tell you didn't put a lot of effort into this. I know that some people like games where there is no plot and you're just playing around, which is nice, but you didn't do that well. It just came off as a cheap game with not a whole lot of effort put into it.
My suggestion is to make it longer with better choices other than just sexual ones that continue the story(because some people, like me, don't really like reading a story just about sex.) Also, you should try to take your games more seriously because you can ruin your reputation and standing in the community.
1/8
Dummy
JMgskills 6/10/2012 12:51:42 PM
thx for feedback.
No, marmotlord, but I fucked the school hottie ;)
Dummy
VolJin 6/10/2012 12:46:31 PM
"based off a true story"?
so you're the sexual slave of your gay science teacher?
Dummy
Marmotlord 6/10/2012 12:42:55 PM
dafuq is this?
i bet it took you 2 minutes!
And I think the posioned food was the good ending.
Dummy
Marmotlord 6/10/2012 12:40:23 PM
I took it seriously, didn't work. So I tried to take it humorously, that didn't work either. Since I can't like it in any way I can possibly think about it, I gave it a 1. Congratulations.
Dummy
ThisisBo 6/10/2012 12:37:52 PM