Quilled if you see this COME BACK THIS SITE NEEDS THIS GAME!

"The snow flurried like laughing cats. He fuckin' hated cats". And "Teresa gazed with the affection of 4257 mashed mice". First.... WHAT???? Best lines ever heard XD I never though that mashed mice were affectionate and 4257 mashed mice seems really specific ;)

hmmmmm how about steampunk tech that the king made to help battle elderborn that sounds cool. And how about the king sends you on missions other thank to kill elderborn like assasinating other kings or tryig to intimidate other smaller kingdoms to join the empire. All for the cause of killing the elderborn. Oooh and how about we also have dragon interactions. Too ambitious things to want?

I will vote for dystopia 

XD was afraid of that. Hmmm question. Do you love book about magic an organized magic system good writing a progressive storyline and awesome bad guys? If you do you'll LOVE this book. Sure know I did. 

Ive talked to different people and scanned website pages ad found that people have differing opinions of the series but ive found (on my experience) that the series is BADASS!!!!!! So? what doe everyone think. Hate it or love it?

Will I be able to use magic to kill the elder born? I like a kind of science/magic things shooting one guy in the chest with a flintlock while summoning oil and throwing it at the nine other guys then shooting the oil and making them burst on fire that kind of thing you know. So will the be possible?

Hey I'm back im just watching dawn of the planet of the apes 2 wanted to update you guys in something my brother said when he saw where a bunch of the humans who didn't die from the virus lived he said. 'Wow there's a lot of people there. It's like Chinatown but it's not' XD gonna go now guys. Keep pumping out more updates quilled I believe in you :)

Hello Commander Quiller! Just wanted to point out a problem I'm having I can't seem to acces the story I'm clicking on the link and it's taking me to the story game  thing where I choose which game i wanna play is that intentional or just a problem? Anyway hope that you finish it soon plz. 

*gasps* you'd do that YES PLEASE. And btw what you said that you were surprised that anyone had read that carefully I think that I would be hard pressed to find somebody that goes into this forum repeatedly and DOESN'T read that carefully. But even if that's not true and everybody on this forum doesn't read that carefully it's just how I am. Trust me when I'm reading a book there's no WAY I'm gonna pay attention to anybody else. People can be yelling at me and I still won't hear them (it's happened before XD) but anyway I'll try to help as a proofreader I wanna help all I can to make sure this story goes up sooner and be sure I'm gonna rate it 8 out of 8 if the rest of the story is as badass as the first chapter :) well see ya later I need to make my Spanish class review for a test