Your life has been one of misery, every last choice in it has resulted in some sort of ridicule or failure, now you must change it. My 1st finished but 2nd work gonna be short but if ya like it lemme know!

This game is set in the world of Bellecus, and includes magic, creatures, and war. This is my very first attempt at a story game so please forgive me for what very likely will include some errors. Other than that I hope you enjoy.

Make it to where you know how you are thrust into the criminal circles I generally find it puts the reader into a more engrossed mindset, just my two-cents

Managed to test out the demo a few times, actually I found it on their first trywm haha I love it, continue it, please? Beautiful storyline, (well, to me to others its flippin insane, but thats the fun part)

Neutral (highest bidder most of the time)

The whole thing (I personally think) Is somewhat of a two sided affair on one side we are stopping terrorism, which is impossible due to the fact its an ideal rather than a country, or group. We are, however limiting it severely the other side is based of off political realism, we are in that area of the world in some cases for oil. As well as trying to limit the power of middle eastern governments and stop other countries from getting the oil as well.

I tend to be a history buff as well. I just don't have time to go through and research everything, so my "research" tends to be finding pictures of fantasy works for inspiration and description of creatures characters etc, my shade was based off arandom google image I found to look awesome    

 Granted my description is much different but the claws came from this and for some reason that kind of inspired the first part of the story completely

I personally love the concept, crazy ambitious though. In order to make it true I believe you would have to build a setting from historical fact and the ground up, which is why I don't think I'll ever do so. Even with my knowledge of Greek myths and what little I know of the peoples I'd fail epically at making a Greek story. Although your sources should make your story mostly accurate. I can't wait, is it like a start an empire thing? or poor beginnings look at the stars from the gutter sort of deal? or being more or less forced into the life??

well swift, If you want me to tone down the bad-ass ness I could add the fact that since every other super character is bad ass then "bad ass" Isn't bad ass its just badder than the normal ass.. lol

Krios Lazure

age:19 (stopped aging mostly)

Hair color (Dirty blonde with a few strands of silver hair)

Eye color (Orange when using magic, sky blue when not,)

Physical attributes- 6'1" 182 lbs. athletic build.

Powers and talents- Elemental magic with a focus mostly on ice, as in his time in the arctic he absorbed a lot of power and now his body temperature stays 20 degrees below normal human levels, no matter how hot it is. His magic includes being able to form ice, water, fire, and air into spells. Although ice is the only element he has nearly complete control over the others he can use only rudimentary spells. He also wields a hand and a half sword which through practice and training he can wield with great skill, while normally suicide in modern combat his ice enhanced body can become hardened and stop some bullets, he can slow others with frost, freeze others, and form a thin ice coating to slide across the ground at breakneck speeds. He is also proficient in hand to hand combat, mostly untrained street fighting techniques, and his newfound power also made him much stronger than most.

Companions-Aurora, and Typhon

Background- once a normal teenage guy Krios went on a camping trip with his parents,  while wandering the forest looking for friends and perhaps a girl, he stumbles across a strange stone. Everything in his mind told him to leave it alone, with Magic being discovered, technology advancing in leaps and bounds far beyond what we could once comprehend, and rumors of people with strange mutations. He wanted to leave it alone, but something pulled him towards it, so he didn't resist the next thing he knows he was in a hospital. Apparently he had suffered sever burns, frozen a creek and started a forest fire at the same time. In amazement he looked down to see the burns slowly being covered in frost then freezing over and healing water replacing the lost flesh. A voice spoke "my name is Aurora, and this is the power I offer you now flee out the window before the take you from here" Your not sure why, but whatever has power like that or can offer you that power Krios listens to and flees. Leaving his family, friends, and life behind afraid of his new powers and assuming most will want the worst for him. After traveling for 6 years he realizes he still looks like he did when he was nineteen and apparently his power slowed the aging process to a crawl, in addition he was attacked by so many seeking his power and he decided to flee to the Arctic to train and escape society. It is their he found Typhon an experiment in making "super animals" in some abandoned lab. With Typhon and newfound confidence in Aurora he returns to the world not seeking answers but rather hoping he finds some in the various mercenary jobs he does.

I'll make one on another thing and copy and paste one sec

Actually now that I think about it, krios more fits a mercenary type with standards, or limits. Like he won't go kill a family, but if they are in the way of his mission or are part of a plot, they may become collateral damage. In the Arctic he also took a relic like two handed sword, and has been focusing on developing his martial and magical talents. He is already in excellent shape and can fight well (always being on the run) and do to Aurora's guidance his magic talent increases even while he dreams.