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Alright I'm starting a gam called the syndicate. Basically a criminal organization with five factions fighting for control. You play through it gettting to the top of the Primus faction and begin to make changes to become head of the syndicate why'll at war with the other factions and the S.R.A. As you defeat the other faction you begin to piece together who is at the head of the syndicate and will you become the true Caesar of it all or die trying. Your Crime empire awaits.

I want suggestion and ideas for it.

i really need some suggestions.

make a map? I don't think i'll join though since i got to much schooling. I was expecting so much less homework because of the computerlabs at school... T.T

Fire not a forum game a story game

S.R.A.? 

You could have maybe real outside organizations such as the Russia Mob or Yakuza or something like that that you have to interact with or some lesser gangs. For the beginning you could do  the characters initiation into the Organization or maybe the character was born into it. 

Make it to where you know how you are thrust into the criminal circles I generally find it puts the reader into a more engrossed mindset, just my two-cents