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I went on over to the web
With thoughts of writing in my head
I clicked the link to load the page
I felt accomplished as I did
Lol. Who am I trying to kid
I did nothing but whine and klage

 

“This is too hard!” I yelled in my rage
“And it doesn’t even earn me living wage!”
My writing skills are barely mid
But if I don’t finish, I’d be better off dead
For it’s on shaky ground I tread
Which might give way into… The Pit

 

I’ve consulted the wise and sage 
And those who have a higher age
I look back to stories I have read
For inspiration, because God forbid
I do something very stupid
And add another name to the SHAME thread

Are you New Zealish?

No, why?

You seem to have rhymed mid with dead, and tread with pit.

AABCCD, BBCAAC, CCABBA

Ah, I see.

AABCCB, BBCAAC, BBACCA*

I am calling you out for fucking around on the forums, when you should be writing the contest story.

That said the poem is nice, even though, as Sent said, some stuff doesn't really rhyme... I guess?

Ah yes that. Also, I think I confused myself with how the rhyme scheme was supposed to go actually. This is why I don't usually do poetry. Anyway. Writing.

Now I want to do this instead of writing too...

WHY DID YOU DO THIS TO ME

LET IT DIE