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1st of all, Hi I am new!

Before I write my story, the biggest problem in this game is probably making the main character (you) a boy or girl? Probably I'll make it a boy since I believe most people in the internet are boys LOL. Another reason why this is important is cause I am going to make my story 100% as realistic as possible to how human-teens are emotionally, violently and sexually. (close your eyes kids!)

Are the majority of people in this forums dudes or ladies?

Or do you have another tip for me?

Welcome to the site.

Tip #1 when writing stories: Make sure you write a complete story, no matter how much you want to share it with the world and release a demo. It doesn't have to be long, just complete.

Tip #2 when writing at CYS: Read the Help & Info section. Pay close attention to 10 ways to make better games, Captain Kiel's Rules Of Writing, and Creating Storygames: Not A Walk In The Park.

Tip #3: For the Boy vs Girl issue, as I see it, there are 3 options:

1. Write gender neutral. Find a way to not specifically make things for one gender or the other. This is the easiest solution.

2. Start writing "IF" statements in code. You can ask the reader if they are a boy or a girl at the start and then on every page where you need to refer to a "he" or "his," you can include "IF" statements in the code. This can be done, but will take some time, and you have to be very careful to catch every instance.

3. Write completely different paths. In other words, if the reader selects "boy," then they are going to get a completely different story (all different pages) than if they select "girl." This is likely the longest option, as it would require you to write a lot more and keep track of many different things. And you can be sure that when a reader reads you story, they will follow one path and likely play again to follow the other path anyway.

Have fun reading and writing here!

Thank you very much for your tips everyone. BTW ENDMASTER I've been a long-time fan of yours! lol.

Ah IF statements, that'll be handy if I can use them, yes I am a programmer too. What language are you using? PHP?

Or do you have your own standard of writing code? Like what will the variables for names/nicknames? Or do you have a list I can refer to when writing code for this site?

Damn it'll be quite a challenge for me to make a girl story since I'm a college guy myself who love women LOL. Maybe I can make a bisexual character I guess.

I found to do the coding and have variables. I need to make it an "advanced story". And the tip says I shouldn't make it an advanced story for my first story.

So I HAVE TO make it an advanced story in order for me to use code, global-variables, if-statements?

You do. But don't let that warning scare you out of using the advanced editor. As for variables, you might like to know that they are integer-only; aside from some system variables like $PAGETEXT, there are no strings and any fractional value is floored.

Seriously? How am I gonna take a name input then?

"Miss ....... (input name here)"

For player-entered names, it unfortunately comes down to storing each letter as a variable and using a bunch of on-page IF statements to display them. Preset names are a great deal simpler. There's an article for this, actually.

Holys...

Really need to make things alot more convinent for users... I am abit lost...

Writing %%NAME%=%1%Bob%%%%NAME%=%2%Marlow%%%%NAME%=%3%Jill%%%%NAME%=%4%Cassandra%%

Just comes out at plain text and not options... Am I suppose to write a <?php CODE HERE ?> or something?

I can't find a "newbie's guide to coding" article in the help section.

So long as you have a variable named "NAME" and its value is within the range 1-4, that bit of text should be converted into one of those names. The % signs signify what's known as "on-page coding", which allows variable values and IF statements to be inserted directly in the page without having to use a page script.

Eh. There are too many stories where the boy is the main character. It would be good to see someone put a girl as the main character.

Most of the members on this site are female, so you should write a female protagonist.

I know someone mentioned in recent comments that they wanted a female path for Necromancer (His sister) but I don't remember seeing that request for Eternal.

If I was going to do a female path for Necromancer, it would be Catalina though rather than Necro's sister.

I looked through the comments on the story, and there have been three requests for a the guy to be female, or to have a choice between genders.

Still not finding them. Not that I don't believe it, but was it specifically Eternal? Because I've gotten that complaint and similar ones on other stories as well.

Well in any case, I wasn't going back and changing any of my stories anyway.

There are about three active female users on the site, one of which I consider myself to be. Anyway, I pretty much agree with what's been said here. People won't mind reading a story from the point of a male/female as long as the story is of high quality. You could always have a gender choice at the beginning, not a complete name input just an option which changes pronouns and stuff. If you do put in the option to choose gender, it would be a good idea to be able to choose the character's sexuality too (as I assume you're going to include some sort of sexual/romantic content), just to add a sort of personal touch. 

I'd say write it from the perspective of your own sex, it allows for a smoother narrative.