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            (DEEP MAN VOICE)

IN A WORLD (pa boom boom pa boom boom pa boom pa boom boom pa boom boom pa boom pa)

A MAN MUST FIND OUT WHY HE IS SPECIAL (Pa Boom Boom Pa Boom Boom Pa Boom Pa Boom Boom Pa Boom Boom Pa Boom Pa)

ON HIS PATH HE MUST CHOOSE GOOD OR EVIL (PA Boom Boom)

HUMANS OR DEMONS (PA BOom BOom)

HIS FREEDOM OR HIS PAST (PA BOOm BOOm)

TO SERVE HIMSELF OR ANOTHER (PA.BOOM..BOOM...BPOW)

 

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                                     ONES OF POWER

                                                                                                                                                                                       rated pg-13

Im glad you got the joke

It's way better. Right now, the biggest tip I can give you is to start working on the story itself.

I often say that I'm part of the 'almost any idea can work' group, what I don't say as often is that I'm also a part of another group, the 'even good ideas can be written poorly' group.