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Hello there.

Here is a story game, intended to be an empowering and affectionate parody of the Harry Potter / general fantasy genre. Written for my nephew (called Arthur) with his birthday coming up in a month. He loves Harry Potter.

I would very much appreciate any comments, criticism or suggestions from anyone who can spare the time to take a look!

I wrote it in Airtable and translated it into a GitHub pages website, viewable here: https://aewshopping.github.io/arthropods/

Title is: Arthur Otley and the Order of the Arthropods

Thanks in advance! :-)

Skipped around it for a bit, didn't actually finish but it's quite well done and I didn't see any issues in the parts I did read. I'm sure he'll like it and hopefully won't realize too quickly that he can just skip the puzzles instead of doing them.

Thanks for taking a look! I'm intending to print it out in book form so skipping won't be possible in physical form :-)

Thank you for looking through :-)