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This is a very adult, def not PG or PC story I started years ago and have decided to continue working on and finish.

Anyone who is interested, and not easily offended, please take a look and give some feedback if so inclined.

It is far from done.

Here is the link:

https://chooseyourstory.com/story/viewer/default.aspx?StoryId=53485

Thanks in advance and again, this is not for the faint of heart.

You don't appear to have the story in sneak peek, so only mods can use that link.

Also, nobody let Naz near this game, she'll start using asterisks again.

I did not realize that!  Thank you, Miz.

Does this one work?

https://chooseyourstory.com/story/cherry-falls~3a-a-tale-to-remember

Story seems to not be there. Maybe you have the link wrong. Obviously I won't be clicking on anything not from CYS on the off chance this is a scam where you post a fake CYS link and hten say, "Oh, okay, try this link," or if it has mimic characters. Naturally. But in all seriousness, if it's unpublished and you want feedback, I think you should allow sneak peak to be turned on in your story's settings.

Links were not working, I put it into sneak peek mode.

Again, not for the faint of heart, but any feedback would be appreciated.

I'll look at it probably tomorrow. If I can find it. So far, no luck.