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18 years ago

A primates Adventure         

A man lies dead in the forest, and you weep on the rock where he met his fate, his blood still fresh on your hands. Why would such a thing happen? You know that they haven't noticed that he's missing now, but just you wait.

 You'd

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                   Hide.

Coming Soon to a www.myadventuregame.com near you.

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18 years ago
Cool! I can't wait!

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18 years ago
That sounds totally sweet!!!

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18 years ago
So... any offers to help?

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18 years ago
What, it's not coming to www.chooseyourstory.com! Just kidding,lol. Hmmm, I don't think I want to help with a game like this just yet (I have my fill of "I killed someone, what will I do!?" kind of stories.) plus on top of that, I'm working on my sequel to "Elevator of no return".

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18 years ago
I would LOVE to help! I'm pretty new to the advanced editor, but I'm a great spellchecker and my pictures are da bomb.

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18 years ago
Not CYS?  You have a game like JFP.  Simpler, but the same essence.

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18 years ago
Well, I'm editing it on MAG. I came to MAG. Very few times do I work my games on CYS.

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18 years ago
Ha! Kind of like, capcom going "nintendo" with their resident evil games,lol!

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18 years ago

WHAT DOES THAT 'LOL' THING MEAN ANYWAYS?!!?

tee hee...

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18 years ago

The dreaded 'lol' thing that these people mention means laugh out loud. It's a horrible acronym.

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18 years ago
Che! But now it's a flippin' word in the Dictionary! LOL, LOL.
Wait, that's perpetual laughter!

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18 years ago
Does it involve monkeys or cougars?

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18 years ago
No, it doesn't. And I'm afraid that there'll be no 'You'd better hide' game, because primates is dormant.

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18 years ago
As primates_II, are you just gonna post stuff?

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18 years ago

Of course not! I'm gonna post stuff as well!

 

Anyhow, since you can't become a coauthor of a game without an active user game creator's permission, I can't edit the games I was editing as primates.

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18 years ago
Are you gonna ask Alexp to give your Password, or what?

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18 years ago
Not quite yet. Once I make a game, then I'll try and go back to primates. Until then, I'm 2.

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18 years ago
this looks mediocre BUT GREAT ADVERTISING.

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18 years ago
Excuse me?

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18 years ago

I guess i need to simplify for you.

 

THIS LOOKS LIKE A HALF ASS GAME, but good avertising.

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18 years ago
Yes, I have to agree that I had good avertising instead of advertising, but where's the other half?

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18 years ago
Doesn't really tell us much about the storyline, but great writing.

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18 years ago
thats good writing to you? ahhahah

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18 years ago
I think October was agreeing with you- the storyline seems average, but the use of color and textual variation was interesting.

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18 years ago
Hey JJJ, we're not as "perfect" writers like you. Not that you are perfect in writing.

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18 years ago
Never said I was or you were

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18 years ago
And I never said I was.

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18 years ago
What I meant was that I thought that compared to most of primates games, it won't have much storyline to it and will involve the usual eaten-by-a-chimp death, yet the way he used the words in the description looked good. I'm not going to judge this until I see the whole thing.

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18 years ago
No, you die of other things, I just put the chimp with the gun in as a sign of impending death. Only in one of my stories is there a death where you actually get eaten by a chimp. You forgot an apostrophe on primates as well.

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17 years ago
Yeah. I agree with him.

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17 years ago
So i see you found a way back to ur first accoutn.  Id say Im a genius.

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17 years ago
No, the guys at Dad's business had a Christmas party and I went to a computer that wasn't logged on as primates_II.

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17 years ago
Oh yeah I see.

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17 years ago
Of course you do.

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17 years ago
Cuz I have eyes.

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17 years ago
Oh yeah? IHOP!

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17 years ago
I can continue my work!

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17 years ago
I published it!