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What is to much?

10 years ago

I have started to write a story game in which, at the beginning, the character gets humiliated, physically and emotionally. The story is set ina kind of medieval age but it is a fantasy.

I want to go into the slightly disturbing methods of humiliation used in the day, but i worry that its slightly to much. These could include: Stripping the character, beating, cutting, spitting or urinating on said person.

Or how detailed would be the limit?

Opinions?

What is to much?

10 years ago

I assume you know end master? Read LOVE SICK, one of his stories, that is the maximum acceptable on this site

What is to much?

10 years ago

I will go do that immediately.

What is to much?

10 years ago

You can do whatever you want, but you'll have to consider it when selecting the maturity level. And yes, read LOVEsick - at your own risk.

What is to much?

10 years ago

Most definetly at your own peril.

*looks at your bio* 

(Cough) might want to fix Harry poter to Harry potter (cough cough)

What is to much?

10 years ago

Lol whoops

I finally see why there are so many warnings about LOVE SICK all over the site now

What is to much?

10 years ago

Welcome to endmasters horrible little mind.

What is to much?

10 years ago

Horrible is a horrible understatement.

What is to much?

10 years ago

trust me i doubt that anyone could write at the deranged level of endmaster your story will probably be fine.