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Hello, beloved Forum! I've stopped by to announce my newest game, Mazkil.

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/mazkil

It's a game where you take control of a young Orc named Mazkil, and you take him through his life. Become the Chieftain of your Tribe and deal with an Orc War against the Kingdom of Man, or become a soldier fighting for the Kingdom of Man against a brutal war with the Elves. So... yeah. Try it, rate, comment, all that yolk. Tell me if I've screwed up somewhere. Thanks.

I don't know if this is an error or not, but there's no way to survive if you choose to save the baby.

I liked it a lot, but one error I came across was the choice to send workers to the Farok Mines.

If you pick “Send workers to the Farok Mines” the following passage says you decided against sending workers to the Farok Mines.

Also the health level stat didn’t seem necessary. At least I didn’t notice it effecting anything.

Hahahaha, well, I lost all of mine and died, so either you're too good or I just suck.

I ended up losing a bunch of health at some point (Like 85 to 30) and I'm not really sure why since I don't recall fighting at the time.

I had 30 for a long time, then it mysteriously went to 10 and then I ended the story still alive with a solid alliance with the humans, a thriving multicultural orc tribe and married with a few offspring.

Errr... Heart Palpitations? Yea, totally not a bug. It was heart palpitations.

Very good. Liked it a lot

Judging by the comments so far, it looks like people liked it a lot.

Are you sure that's the general consensus? Perhaps we should wait until a few more people leave comments...

Damn it, Political had to go and break the chain by saying "Great Game!"

This is why we can't have nice things. (Well one of the reasons anyway)

Oh, thank God, I was starting to think you'd successfully started a hive mind and that I was next. On an unrelated note, I liked it a lot.

Clearly, Political needs more tyranny.

He did say that, didn't he? Well, when it comes to changing thought, I liked it a lot.

JJJ The Banisher's Master Plan

Step 1. Purge the bad storygames, freeform forum games and the Warrior Cats.

Step 2. Purge the free thinkers and any opposition.

Step 3. Unity.

That's not a bad plan. I liked it a lot.