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18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

Hey guys,

So, for the 18 people that rated it the worst game in the entire world, could you please PM me with some feedback, or comment here, so I can make it better than absolute feces? Thanks!

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago
Whoever did that is a noob. I would disregard those ratings.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

I actually thought it was great. Thinking hypothetically, they might vote lowly because they were offended, didn't like the vulgarity, were too stupid to use objects, or they were just trolling in general.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago
Whats funny is if they were smart trolls they'd read a little and find out that rating it a one does NOTHING to its rating, because ratings out of the normal are completely discarded. You could rate it a one all day long, but it wouldn't change anything.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago
Ground Zero 46 "1s"

Yeah, you're fine.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

Why would they do that? Although, I must admit that at first I thought it was really linear because I only played the shelter paths because the one time I didn't I got killed, but after that I realized that the story was rediculously expansive and enjoyable to boot. Even before I discovered the other branches, I gave it either a seven or an eight because of how well written it was.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago
Snow got 27 "1s" I'm sort of surprised Seth got that even counting the usual random trolling.

I think the featured story that has the most is Die Zombie Die! Pt 3. 53 "1s"

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

I guess some people just got bored with Snow. I did, but I vote on how much thought and how well written I think the story is.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

Frustration could also be a factor. I've heard people claim they rated low on that game because of the ending. And of course, it is after witnessing the ending that they give the game its rating.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

I forgot to mention that I was talking about Homo Perfectus 3. Silly me

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

Have you done that.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

Has who done what?

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

You mean rate in frustration? No, I hope not. If so, I haven't realized it.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

I can see that, that would fall into the too stupid to use items branch I suggested to madglee. However, you posted a tutorial in the game on how to use the powers, so they would have to be perty stupid to not know how.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

I meant the ending regarding "his" fate during the super heroic ending. I'm trying to be subtle enough not to spoil it for anyone. But yes, there have also been people who didn't understand the power-item system. There were even people who didn't understand that they had to pick it up in the beginning of each HP game. And HP 2 got some low ratings because of that.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

ahh, i get it.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

Interesting how this goes.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago
Snow is easy to get to the ending, and the pages are very short. (If all you want is the point for rating.)

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

snow was good though.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

I gave it a four because of the shortness of it and how depressing it is. I go on here to have fun not be depressed. But this is getting off topic.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

wow you gave it a 4 becuase it was sad? thats a terrible reason to rate a story low...

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

No I gave it a 4 due to shortness and none diverse paths. If it was long  and sad it would have gotten a 6 or 7. Yes how I feel at the end does effect my ratting.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

i rate on how strongly i was effected by the story, if it moved me or changed the way think, then it will be given a higher score. it being short is irrelevent. quality over quanity any day.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

If there is diversity I don't care about the length but no diversity length than becomes important.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

there are at leaste two endings.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

Yes which both involve practically the same thing only slightly different.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

its a short story with short pages, the theme doesnt change because the desired form of pathos is supposed to remain constant. therefore all ending need to be similar to ensure the same emotional mark dispite the players choices while allowing there to be some form of individualism in the ending reached.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

Ok i agree to disagree on this issue. I am going to go play Mommy now.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

in short, it deserves better than a 4

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago
You gave Snow a 4 because it's short? That's so ridiculous. Snow is perhaps the most well-written story on the site, rating it a four is nothing shot of preposterous and I can't believe you rated it that.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

As I said is the little to no diversity to the story and because  of Bo's arguments I changed my rating to a 5. This just my opinion and you guys are doing little to nothing on changing it.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

You refusing to accept it doesn't mean they are doing nothing :P

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

No I refuse to agree with you on changing my position but you passionate argument for it made me change my rating slightly. I am just going to say I agree to disagree on this argument.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

I wasn't passionate at all actually, I just put maybe one or two posts explaining my point of view lol. If anything Ugi and 3J were passionate, and I agree with them, you can't  vote a four because you disagree with depressing stories. ... Well, actually you can, just never become a professional critic.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

As I said not only depressing. that would have made it a 6 or 7 It was the shortnes and non diversty to the story.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

Length shouldn't matter, as long as it is a good story, which it is. The voting, like Ugi said, should be based on Quality over Quantity.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago
Snow has three endings. At least one of which is perhaps a happy one.

Diversity is a matter of opinion. If what you want when you think diverse is different plotlines, then snow is very linear. There's only one set of events, and only one "secret" scene before the endings.

The "point" of the story, if it has one, is to replay the same events, but react to them differently in order to discover the different endings. Once you see how choice affects the outcome, maybe you understand something about the characters and maybe not.

Anyway, I'm still surprised people bother to play all the way to the end of games like Mommy or some of 3j's stuff just so they can rate it 1.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

I've had two of the endings, and I don't know what the secret scene is, but I think I got it.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago
A trolling sort can sort of end Mommy quickly to give it a "1" if they go ahead and take all the pills immediately. Still sort of long though, since you have to go through the character creation section first.

Don't think you can end OMS prematurely though, at least not without playing a good portion of it first.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

Notice everything is length. No one agures the no diversty except for uglick. The path was to linner I nocked off 1 point for length one for none diversity and one for depressing equals a 5 ratting

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

I have found 2 endings the secret secen but no happy ones.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

i allready explained why it doesnt have expansive endings.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

Exactly I was just stating that is one of the reasons I rated what I did.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago
First of all, knocking a point off for the story not making you feel happy, at least to me, is both bizarre and ridiculous. What are you rating the story based on? How happy it made you feel or how good it is? If it made you depressed, then IT'S A GOOD STORY! Since it obviously managed to have an effect on you.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

it needs to have the desired effect, it was supposed to make you feel depressed, but it made you happy, then there is a problem, with either you, or the story.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago
Well I don't mind a depressing story. It just took it to far for me.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

... If you don't mind a depressing story, but you don't like it because it made depressed, then chances are you don't like a depressign story.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

*if it was*

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago
It just took the depressing field to far for me.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

ok, i dont have a reply to that. why repost it?

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago
Explaining it further I thought it was worded wierd. No there is a point for me when something turns from depressing to just plain awful and this crossed its line. Not awful in bad writing just as in to emotional sad.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

so because it was to sad for you, your going to rate it low dispite how good the writing was?

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago
That is only one point off the rating. There are still two other issues.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago
Lol, I'm going to laugh if cool ends up re-rating the story a 1 just to spite you guys.

I don't think you're going to change his mind any further on the subject.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago
Listen to end master. I am getting to that point.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

nope, but he insist on arguing, and wont turn him down. plus his rating is totally irrelevent to overall rating of the story.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago
You guys keep auguring the point. Several times I had offered an olive branch and you guys keep going.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

you can just... i dont know... stop.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago
No, because than it looks like I am backing down from my position.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

actually it looks like your being mature and relize that no one agrees with you, and never will.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago
OK if no one else disses me further than what has been already stated; this will be my last message on this forum. I am going to have to agree to disagree on this issue. Nothing you say or do will change my mind and further more I wont change yours. Therefor we will be locked in a stalemate of unending argument reusing the same points over and over again. I hope and pray you people see the wisdom in this and stop this discussion where it stands.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

so your still trying to get the last word? cuz somehow that makes you not wrong?

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

and we were never dissing you, just telling you that you were wrong. good job on not replying by the way.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

length is allso an unfair reason to remove a point. Quality over quantity, some things are better short.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago
Cool, let me rephrase your argument here:

"I'm removing a point from its rating because it's depressing. But I like depressing. Just not THAT depressing. Yeah, I mean, it's well written and has it's desired effect but it just shouldn't be that SAD! But it's all good cuz it's only one point."

I just can't believe that you're rating a story lower because you don't like that the author was talented enough to be able to imbue the right emotion in you.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago
Refer to my last post I am done here.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago
Definite cop-out right there. "You guys really beat my argument but I'm still right and logic won't change anything!"

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

LOL 3J you just made my morning.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

I think its more opinion based than logic, really. Now that I think about it, the rating system should be based off of what you (as in the reader) think of the story. If the reader is going to be criticized because of the way he views stories, why should he/she rate in the first place? So he can get picked on for expressing his views? Basically, my point is that we shouldn't criticize or make fun of Cool because of his choice of ratings. I know I also said that you shouldn't rate poorly because a story is depressing, but that is just my opinion and I would like to withdraw that from the actual argument.

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

let sleeping dogs lie...

18 1's on Mommy

14 years ago

I actually disagree, but thats another argument, if you want to get into it thats fine though lol. I was simply stating what I now think, the choice to argue is completely the other person's perrogative, although if they do it would be my fault, if that makes sense.