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I just made my first story?

13 years ago

Hello everyone,

This is my very first post on these boards as I've only been a member of the site for a few days now. But tonight I finished my first story/game. It's all based on a relationship I had, well a series of them really and I just thought it would be awesome to get some feedback. I hope I'm not coming across as some naive troll by advertising my stuff on here but I can assure you all, I mean well. I love almost every game I've played on the site so far and decided it was time to take a crack at making my own. It's called "The Regrets of a Teenage Romantic" and concerns school, dating and the decisions that come along with it.

Thanks for reading and I hope I didn't ruffle any feathers by sort of self promoting. Only trying to be friendly and maybe make a few friends.

 

I just made my first story?

13 years ago
Hey John! This belongs in the parlor room so I moved it there.

Not sure what the questionmark is doing in the title of your post, but well done on getting one out! Just ask October about how hard the first one can be, haha.

I just made my first story?

13 years ago
Or me :S

I just made my first story?

13 years ago

Thanks, man! Yeah, I wasn't so sure where to post this so I just headed to The Lounge because I figured anything random goes there. But maybe this isn't that random after all haha...

 

And about the question mark hahaa, I dunno I just figured I'd throw it in there because this is kind of an inquiry and I just thought I'd be a little dumb and clever at the same time I guess. But thank you! It only took about 40 minutes (as you can definitely tell) but I just wanted to jump start my story writing on the site so I just went head first and completed a little thingy as sort of an intro to my work.

 

As for the rest of you, thank you! I really appreciate everyone's comments and support. Love you all haha

I just made my first story?

13 years ago

You sound like you're at the grammies! :P

I just made my first story?

13 years ago

Haha XD I just didn't expect people to be so friendly. I think I've just spent way too much time on the IMDb boards where everyone's a dick.

I just made my first story?

13 years ago

I like it, it was a nice blend of light-hearted humor and plot.

I just made my first story?

13 years ago

After two attempts I just stopped making mine public... congrats, by the way :)

I just made my first story?

13 years ago
I just made my first story. Yay!

I just made my first story?

13 years ago

Your story was pretty good I like the plot of it

I just made my first story?

13 years ago

Nice to know your stoyry was pretty good and I like the whole plot of it im in the process of making my story