http://chooseyourstory.com/story/star-wars~3a-legacy
you have a good idea for a story, but the grammar needs some work (mostly spelling) other than that it seems good
It's nice to actually see someone trying to make a decent game - keep at it! =)
Hey! I'm making one damnit!
I hope there's a jedi path that has a different childhood than your current one.
Well thank you for now i'm just doing the main branch for the three ending.